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Heaven on Earth :")

Question me this earth or heaven I live
How wondrous life O I’m in love with thee
Name me all your wish and all I shall give
For you turn this world into heaven to me
A hundred roses are the red of your lips
What if our lips met like a sea touching shores?
The warmth of your breath the sway of your hips
Would I be punished with my arms wrapped in yours?
You’ve changed my world with the blink of an eye
Your love surrounds me in a rapturous awe
There is something that I cannot deny
With you my love I won’t search anymore
First glance I realized you’re such a goddess
Sent from above to fulfill my emptiness
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
My sonnet heehee ^_^ Just wanna keep it on my profile... This sonnet ^_^ I wrote it as if I were a man ^____^ I don't know what men like most in women. When a man falls in love with a woman, what would he do? What kind of poem that he would write for her... I finally realized that being a man isn't easy... lol But if I were a man, I would ask 'thesunandthesea' out to date!!! lolol

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Macduff5
Hi Sas,

A really nice sonnet. You have come so far. It's hard to believe you are doing all this as a second language. I loved the picture/graphics too. wine bouquet
Fellsman
I absolutely agree with Rob... When English is not your mother tongue, it makes this a remarkable sonnet. Well done...

Bill wine wine
mcradloff
That picture reminds me of the movie Dumb and Dumber when Jim Carrey is having a daydream and the woman opens the door and the the doves come flying out. I can't speak for all men, but me for personally it is hard to ask out women, but I wish I had, so what if they say no, one might have said yes.teddybear dance daydream
Odette67
This is excellent Jib... You are so talented. purple heart
lucy1777
teddybear I like your sonnet and your art work..great job jib!
CloudySky
Nice work. You did a great job. hug
elo69
if I was not so busy being myself,wouldn't mind being you for a day..always seems like your having so much fun. every time I read one of your poems..its like your made of smiles and hearts
a real angel

a good poet too...elo.. wave
paloma66
Great work of Verse and graphics,love both.You are a clever girl

thumbs up purple heart bouquet bouquet
LadyMorgana60
Your sonnet is so well done Thesunandthesea.. yay
Sonnets are not easy and you have grasped it with wonderful expression, flow & passion..your written English is excellent,
A lucky man who should happen to win your happy heart.thumbs up gift applause
renbudiezz
"lips met like a sea touching shores" now that is a powerfull line, really liked your write.
Maxeen_1
Heaven on Earth :") by: thesunandthesea
Luved Your Sonnet SUNSHINE smiler :) you brighten the day with your sunny personality..Luv ur great graphics too!! well done SS x ]heart wings bouquet angel
What if our lips met like a sea touching shores?
The warmth of your breath the sway of your hips
Would I be punished with my arms wrapped in yours?
You’ve changed my world with the blink of an eye
Your love surrounds me in a rapturous awe
There is something that I cannot deny
thesunandthesea
Thank you soooooo much everyone! Especially, Fellsman! This poem wouldn't be this beautiful without your kind help! Thank you again and again. MISS YOU.
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