My Love

My love my heart hungers to touch your soul
To return the two back into just one
To make a diamond out of the gray coal
To stay when fear makes me just want to run

You have captured my imagination
Freed me from the prison I was held in
Gave direction to my destination
Made me feel like really living again

Does a star shine less without the moon light
Or is it enhanced to a brighter hue
With moon by side is it not twice as bright
Do we believe what eyes do see as true

It is our hearts that speak for us to hear.
You me together message of love clear.
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Posted: Apr 2012

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hawqeye
"The night sky is twice as beautiful when viewed by two".
Sad but pretty.God bless.

But alas,I am the one gone
And you are left to carry on,
So live your life with gladness
And forget all of life's sadness.

We were one and again shall be,
But stay your course and see
That a lifetime goes by so fast
And we will be united at last.
lastwaltz
Wow what a wonderful write....if we could all speak from the heart our world would be heaven
teddybear heart beating heart1 heart wings ...just trying to talk from my heart
LadyMorgana60
Hi Happygolucky4u
Enjoyed your sonnet very much, thanks for sharing wine yay
Maxeen_1
My Love by: Happygolucky4u
Does a star shine less without the moon light
Or is it enhanced to a brighter hue
With moon by side is it not twice as bright
Do we believe what eyes do see as true

It is our hearts that speak for us to hear.
You me together message of love clear.
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lovely poem happygolucky really enjoyed.
hugthumbs up angel
deeprootlove1
It is our hearts that speak for us to hear.
You me together message of love clear

u express love with true feelings,thanks for ur share
Happygolucky4u
Thank you hawqeye for your contribution to the poem. It was quite lovely. And in a way so appropriate for mebouquet
Poetnumber1
This is absolutely beautiful writingwow applause M.M
Odette67
Beautiful sonnet Happy. purple heart
niah9
when words come from the heart, they are sincere....and these certainly do....great write Happygolucky4you...Kathyapplause teddybear
cafetwo2010
A true gem of heart Happy.wine kiss teddybear
Ahyra
Very nice, romantic poem Happy bouquet
paloma66
Words are easy to be spoken by when they come directly from a heart like yours they are sweet and true.Lovely sonnet HGL.thumbs up wine bouquet bouquet
elo69
happy got lucky and fell in love,do believe,that's what my ears are saying. Nothing like a little inspiration or maybe was just the spring,were thoughts turn to love as world blossoms green and night is filled with scented flowers. Ether way it a very touching poem....elo.... devil
windyweatherly
Way to go happy

"you were released from prison you were held captive in"
and also made you feel like living again

Happy plucky. Be blessed. What I can tell you is that LOVE is powerful and beautiful


Good luck and enjoy

Phyllis
windyweatherly
Correction Happygolucky. Not plucky. Apologies

Thanks
Happygolucky4u
Thank you lastwaltz batting
I went out to see the moon last night and twas not so bright my star without the moon by its sideblues
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