( on Florida )

[ On Florida ]


Golden arrows of sunlight pulse through the arms of the old mighty oak The intense rays soothes my body and soul. I recline and inhale the suns glory.

Winged creatures flutter by over head while furry tailed chatterers scamper below. Fresh February air breezes over me . I let go and surrender to the trance. How magnificent to bask in this serene day.

Lisa Hegler
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
Just one moment in time ..we should always take all the time we can to stop and smell the roses.

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lisaofflorida64
I was kind of hopeing some of you would comment on this little poem. Could some one please give me their honest opinion about this poem?
thanks
bungallow55
lisa

There's no right or wrong writing a poem, no rules at all.

Not even the expert in poetry knows what their poems are
about.

What is important the words that flows from your mind
any poem you write has no right or wrong.

Those are your words, period.typing
lisaofflorida64
Thank you n61 and 55 For your replys. I see what you mean n61.
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