~Royal White Dove~ (Macduff Challenge)

Gentle summer rain silk laden hair
Soft passing breeze waits in its flow
Allowing such beauty, rights to pass by.

Cheekbones of stature
Her scent fills the air
Tan lines of gold
Thoughts of desire, desire to hold.

My mind going crazy
While thoughts kiss her skin
A bistro a table
Stirred feelings within.

Her fingers dabble, violin plays
White dove fly's by in her fixed gaze
Lights on the cobblestone bring on the night
Gondolier singing, moon shining bright.

Catch of her breath stirs passion within
Her soft lips arrive, shes the best that I've seen
Moons cut like diamonds in the gondola's wake
Her beauty, her presence, my heart is in quake.

I've nothing to say as you've captured my voice
Your silent whispers filling the air
My eyes see your soul plated with gold
No words need be said, no stories be told.

As nights gentle breeze
Keeps you in flight
Soaring above
My "Royal White Dove"~


~Bentlee~
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Posted: Apr 2012
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Cheers everyone.

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Comments (28)

CloudySky
Very nice and sweet write. So much love floating in poet's corner. Enjoyed reading this. heart beating
Ahyra
Sweet and romantic. Nice written Bentlee wine
Odette67
As nights gentle breeze
Keeps you in flight
Soaring above
My "Royal White Dove"~


Beautiful poem Bentlee.purple heart
CelticPoet12
Hi there. I want you to know that I floated through your poem, hungry for the next phase. It was almost a Deja Vu sort of memory attached to this and I kept thinking, I want THAT again. I want to know that, feel that and soar again. So lovely. Thank you for this breathy soul stirring journey. I really loved this!~ ELegant.
Special_Lady67
I really like this challenge.. such sensual romantic thoughts are being imagined. wine
deeprootlove1
really i enjoy reading it,always ur words like the summer breeze,thanks for ur share
lucy1777
BENTLEE THIS IS A VERY ROMANTIC POEMheart beating THANKS...
swade777
Hey Bentlee! Great to see you stepping up to Rob's challenge as well!!! You've created a masterfully written romantic submission here my friend! I was especially taken by the very creative line.... "Moons cut like diamonds in the gondola's wake" - That's an AWESOME line! Love it!!! Great job Sir!!! thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
Macduff5
Hi Bentlee,

All I can say for this poem is...masterful. Your choice of imagery and creation of atmosphere is as romantic as it gets. Beautifully expressed. Cheers mate cheers thumbs up
Bentlee
ty CloudySky, for your kind words and taking your time to read..... wine hug
Bentlee
hello Ahyra, welcome back, ty so much for your comment......wine hug
Bentlee
ty Odette for commenting and enjoying my write wine hug
Bentlee
ty CelticPoet, I'm glad with my write you were able to take a personal journey as you did, cheers wine hug
Yankee4youonline today!
Hi Bentlee, This is a wildly vivid and imaginative write....hey man I want to see the movie..... cheers wine handshake
Bentlee
ty so much for your comment Special Lady, wine hug
Bentlee
ty Khaled for commenting, nice to see you as it has been along time, I hope you are well, cheers
Ladybee42
very nice and soooo romantic bentlee
thumbs up thumbs up purple heart purple heart
Bentlee
lol ty Lucy, they say Venice does that too people lol, ty for commenting, wine hug
Bentlee
Hi Swade, isn't it great when you write that some very cool lines form on the page, ty so much for your comment, cheers
Bentlee
ty so much Macduff, very kind words indeed, cheers mate, cheers
Bentlee
ty very much LadyMorgana for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed, wine hug
Bentlee
lol Yankee, thats cool you enjoyed my write, cheers and ty mate, cheers
Bentlee
ty Ladybee for your commenting, glad you enjoyed my write, cheers, wine hug
Maxeen_1
Royal White Dove
Her fingers dabble, violin plays
White dove fly's by in her fixed gaze
Lights on the cobblestone bring on the night
Gondolier singing, moon shining bright.

Benlee wow so Romantic and inspiring ..it sure drifts along like a breeze luved this dear poet...excellent KUDOS for you ALL you guys On PC have surely stepped up to the mark..with so many fab poems Hugs ..Livy purple heart hug thumbs up
jazzy75
It played like a movie.....a beautiful scene of poetry. Nicely done my friend.teddybear
Bentlee
ty so much Livy, what a sweet comment you've left here, it's funny how some times when we write we don't see the depth of the written words, it's when comments come it truly hits as to how effective a write really is, ty again for your kind words, wine hug
Bentlee
Hello Jazzy, ty my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed, and good to see you, be well and again ty, wine hug
Bentlee
I was doing a little tour of my writes this morning and decided i wanted to re-share this one with everyone. it has slowly become one of my favourites. Thank you everyone who commented and took time to read it. Cheers


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