Gentle summer rain silk laden hair Soft passing breeze waits in its flow Allowing such beauty, rights to pass by.
Cheekbones of stature Her scent fills the air Tan lines of gold Thoughts of desire, desire to hold.
My mind going crazy While thoughts kiss her skin A bistro a table Stirred feelings within.
Her fingers dabble, violin plays White dove fly's by in her fixed gaze Lights on the cobblestone bring on the night Gondolier singing, moon shining bright.
Catch of her breath stirs passion within Her soft lips arrive, shes the best that I've seen Moons cut like diamonds in the gondola's wake Her beauty, her presence, my heart is in quake.
I've nothing to say as you've captured my voice Your silent whispers filling the air My eyes see your soul plated with gold No words need be said, no stories be told.
As nights gentle breeze Keeps you in flight Soaring above My "Royal White Dove"~
CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAApr 21, 2012
Very nice and sweet write. So much love floating in poet's corner. Enjoyed reading this.
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaApr 21, 2012
Sweet and romantic. Nice written Bentlee
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 21, 2012
As nights gentle breeze Keeps you in flight Soaring above My "Royal White Dove"~
Beautiful poem Bentlee.
CelticPoet12Prescott, Arizona USAApr 21, 2012
Hi there. I want you to know that I floated through your poem, hungry for the next phase. It was almost a Deja Vu sort of memory attached to this and I kept thinking, I want THAT again. I want to know that, feel that and soar again. So lovely. Thank you for this breathy soul stirring journey. I really loved this!~ ELegant.
Hey Bentlee! Great to see you stepping up to Rob's challenge as well!!! You've created a masterfully written romantic submission here my friend! I was especially taken by the very creative line.... "Moons cut like diamonds in the gondola's wake" - That's an AWESOME line! Love it!!! Great job Sir!!!
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 22, 2012
Hi Bentlee,
All I can say for this poem is...masterful. Your choice of imagery and creation of atmosphere is as romantic as it gets. Beautifully expressed. Cheers mate
ty Ladybee for your commenting, glad you enjoyed my write, cheers,
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKApr 26, 2012
Royal White Dove Her fingers dabble, violin plays White dove fly's by in her fixed gaze Lights on the cobblestone bring on the night Gondolier singing, moon shining bright. Benlee wow so Romantic and inspiring ..it sure drifts along like a breeze luved this dear poet...excellent KUDOS for you ALL you guys On PC have surely stepped up to the mark..with so many fab poems Hugs ..Livy
ty so much Livy, what a sweet comment you've left here, it's funny how some times when we write we don't see the depth of the written words, it's when comments come it truly hits as to how effective a write really is, ty again for your kind words,
I was doing a little tour of my writes this morning and decided i wanted to re-share this one with everyone. it has slowly become one of my favourites. Thank you everyone who commented and took time to read it. Cheers
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Keeps you in flight
Soaring above
My "Royal White Dove"~
Beautiful poem Bentlee.
All I can say for this poem is...masterful. Your choice of imagery and creation of atmosphere is as romantic as it gets. Beautifully expressed. Cheers mate
Her fingers dabble, violin plays
White dove fly's by in her fixed gaze
Lights on the cobblestone bring on the night
Gondolier singing, moon shining bright.
Benlee wow so Romantic and inspiring ..it sure drifts along like a breeze luved this dear poet...excellent KUDOS for you ALL you guys On PC have surely stepped up to the mark..with so many fab poems Hugs ..Livy