Forgiveness

I made a mistake awhile ago
An expressed myself out loud
Directed it at a lovely lass
From who's dire life she felt proud
She travelled seven seas to be with me
An only then it was known
The mistake i'd made awhile ago
Had now really grown
For us to be together
Changes had to be made
But how do you change something
That is significantly engraved
The mistake we made you see was
To be blinded by desire
Never to see the other side
That happened to fuel this fire
For like two rams we did engage
Trying to win just what?????
It made the friendship sour
Quicker than a lot
Amazing how i have learnt
The value of a sole
It took six months an 6000 klms
For me to share my goal
I wish not to hurt anyone
In my search for a love true
An i know that saying sorry
Will just never do
But sorry is all i have
An it comes from deep within
An a friendship born from a love torn
Must surely not be a sin
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
For Eibhlin

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LadyMorgana60
Hi Nuwahri wave
I'm sure that your heartfelt Sorry is felt and returned likewise..
In life we have to take those chances..I am sorry for you both that it didn't go the way you both had wished..But well done for taking that chance in the first place!thumbs up
Thank you for sharing. wine
simpleME32
sorry..can't be a sin either,is felt directly and spreaded miles all over the world but when comes from heart is much understood.Anztac''..s not crazy about title..its more about his own tribe.thank you Nuwahri.
Nuwahri61
I never know wich way to take your comments mcradloff so i will just sat thanks ha ha ...........Really appreciate your comments Ladymorgan thanks for the thoughts ...........an always appreciate what you comment on simpleme 32 albeit hard to decipher but appreciated much the same ....regards n61cheers
willw
i like it ,,,good lyrics for a song ,,,im gonna steal it ,,well, borrow it.,
Nuwahri61
pay me the money lad an i will write for you all night long he he cool
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