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Let’s fly to Neverland! (A Terzanelle)

Though I’m not Peterpan not Ariel or the Angel of glory
Tonight I’ll come to your dreams take you to Neverland
Where we can never grow old so come with me!

In the Neverland I will make you be the better man
We will grow wild and free, a breath-taking fantasy
Tonight I’ll come to your dreams take you to Neverland

Under the velvet sky, baby come fly with me
Open your heart spread your wings and that you can fly
We will grow wild and free, a breath-taking fantasy

Way beyond the moon if the moonlight makes you cry
Your tears of joy I’ll dry by bathing you in the sea
Open your heart spread your wings and that you can fly

I’ll make you see, my love will last for eternity
Tonight when I come to you, let’s fly to Neverland
Your tears of joy I’ll dry by bathing you in the sea

I’ll treat you as my heart, I’ll hold your hand
Though I’m not Peterpan not Ariel or the Angel of glory
Tonight when I come to you, let’s fly to Neverland
Where we can never grow old so come with me!

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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
practicing Terzanelle ^_^


THANK YOU EVERYONE VERY VERY MUCH FOR TAKING TIME TO READ ^_^ I AM AN AMATEUR WRITER... LOL

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Comments (9)

swade777
S&S, you may be an amateur writer, but you're sure a seasoned charmer!!! I applaud applause your willingness to tackle these new forms of poetry! I'm not even that brave!! help
thesunandthesea
^_^ Dear Swade, thank you ^_^ purple heart

Would you like to fly with me super to Neverland where we can never grow old? You will never grow old!!!happy place ( hope it ain’t too late!!! blushing cus you’re old already!!!nerd ooops :”D heehee I love you that’s why I tease you okay? hmmm^_* )


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swade777
I love your teasing! It keeps me feeling young! banana
hedistuff
Well, I'll chip in an asset of death. It saves one from such a certain life of uncertain eternity. And be God sure that one is allowed to never have to face a box such as Pandora's. Just playin' sunandsea...wonderful write.
thesunandthesea
Thank you Hedistuff, wonderful comment ...^_^ hug
Macduff5
Hi Sas,

Another lovely terzanelle. Beautifully written and illustrated. I see you have found that inspiration. Thanks for sharing. wine bouquet
mcradloff
Since I'm a huge fan of Michael Jackson, the first thing I thought of was going on his Zipper. It's an amusement ride with steel cages in the shape of cars. You go around like a ferris wheel and you can rock back and forth with your body to make the cage flip up to three times around. You have to have two people to go on it, so it has been many years(1989?) since I've been on one.teddybear head banger
Odette67
I’ll treat you as my heart, I’ll hold your hand
Though I’m not Peterpan not Ariel or the Angel of glory
Tonight when I come to you, let’s fly to Neverland
Where we can never grow old so come with me!

Dear Jib, I don't know much Terzanelles or Zippers... What I do know is a good poem when I read one... this is stunning work. teddybear hug purple heart
Ahyra
Nice and happy poem S&S bouquet
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