I know your heart is acheing The earth trembles with your pain I've scarred your life with a lovers knife Despondent for my gain
My intentions were not planned Nor schemeing in their vision So when light of day shined our way Overwhelming was our collision
Fragile as a butterfly I tendered a gentle hand But what you saw at the door Was nothing but demand
I feel you never settled Your travels all but slow The chance we take was our mistake A hindrance for us to grow
No sooner had you arrived Your reasoning a blur I'll not be here long its all wrong I feel i am a spur
I helped you on your journey A path that wasn't planned I never held you back my vision black A stranger in this land
I hope you are well Whereever you may be For i really care an would share A friendship for you an me
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Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
Still seeking forgiveness for an emotional mess this lady was after a very brief relationship with her ..........I covered this in an earlier poem titled "Forgiveness"......
I enjoyed this very much and hope she finds forgiveness in her heart. Friendships can be hard to endure after your heart has been hurt, but special people can find it in themselves to move forward.
Thanks cloudsky i hope she does too......but can understand that it takes time ........ appreciate the comments regards n61
edollySydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 25, 2012
I needed to know what you felt for me, So I could steer my own ...destiny, Words from your lips you found hard to say, Your peotry seemed... the only way, You couldnt tell me what was in your heart, Honesty I admired from the very start, Are your boots filled with lead once again, Or have you redeemed your lost freedom,
I travelled high and travelled low, And wrecked my head ...on the go, Sorry if I left you feeling deflated or flat, I felt you gave up... And that is that, You say I was single minded... that is true, But stubborness..pride was your downfall too, We laughed about nice memories we'd make, For that I am grateful...forever will keepsake,
Writing this down doesnt come easy to me, Tis' you that has this gift ..you see, Careful when you direct your pen next time, Wouldnt like you to end up with a heart like mine, Glad to have met you.. you have shown me alot.. Some good...some awesome...some not...
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So I could steer my own ...destiny,
Words from your lips you found hard to say,
Your peotry seemed... the only way,
You couldnt tell me what was in your heart,
Honesty I admired from the very start,
Are your boots filled with lead once again,
Or have you redeemed your lost freedom,
I travelled high and travelled low,
And wrecked my head ...on the go,
Sorry if I left you feeling deflated or flat,
I felt you gave up... And that is that,
You say I was single minded... that is true,
But stubborness..pride was your downfall too,
We laughed about nice memories we'd make,
For that I am grateful...forever will keepsake,
Writing this down doesnt come easy to me,
Tis' you that has this gift ..you see,
Careful when you direct your pen next time,
Wouldnt like you to end up with a heart like mine,
Glad to have met you.. you have shown me alot..
Some good...some awesome...some not...
Eíbhlin..