if I die tonight would you remember me tomorrow if the sun went out the stars went dark would you remember me tomorrow if I died tonight if a tornado landed tore up a town sun went out stars went dark would you remember me Tomorrow if I died tonight if the rivers rose flooded the ground if a tornado landed tore up the town sun went out the stars went dark if I died tonight would you remember me Tomorrow if the stars went dark the moon went out rivers flooded the ground a tornado tore up the town would you remember me tomorrow If I died tonight then stop your madness for I am all ready dying for I am the earth river's are my vain bursting out at the seem you think that is just a tornado No, it is a sneeze you see now I got a cold I just had to blow my nose I am dying can you not see I am the earth would you remember me if I die tonight
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Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
making the earth sick. a living planet that is dying from our own destruction.
Thank you so kind for stopping in LadyMorgan. I think through poetry we can band together and make a difference even if it is a small difference I know we can open eyes and let the world know people care.
Not to make haste. but the world would indeed be here tomorrow if she died because the world did not explode and pulverize into nothing I did not say that. I simply said she died. Eventually but over time all life would cease to exist. but there would still be a tomorrow. as the storms on earth increase with intensity eventually just wiping out everything. but see man is so narrow minded he would just continue on with his normal day to day things and not even notice if the earth died in fact it seems like that now with the soils of the earth so polluted the waters the very air. she is as bout dead now as she can be she cannot no longer sustain her natural beauty. thank you for stopping in.. Hope this makes sense..
kick...
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAMay 21, 2012
"WOULD YOU REMEMBER ME IF I DIE TONIGHT""
So very touchy Kick. I am sure she will.
I am ready to sit down with you and SA on the project. Please let me know what to do. The sooner the better that we start.
Thank you so much \kick.
Phyllis
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 21, 2012
if I die tonight would you remember me tomorrow
You bet we would remember you...This is very good dark poetry.
beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 21, 2012
Wow, excellent kickit..
Ty for your direct yet gentle reminder of the choices we've made and can still make, one way or the other, in relationship to our earth and to one another.
if you want the stereo you have to take the 26 kids that goes with the stereo you have eni meni myni mo just to name a few. if you really want it that bad i'll have to send it over with a mini van..
when I was typing my response to you I knew or thought that this is what you were refering to as meaning tomorrow in out own life or our future life as humans on earth. this way of meaning your right there would not be no tomorrow eventually life could not continue way it is going.. thank you for your reply back and thank you for your added comments.
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yet with these lines
I just had to blow my nose
I am dying can you not see
I am the earth
would you remember me
if I die tonight
another meaning to the incurable "Man Flue"
Enjoyed your poem Kickit
kick..
The sad thing is if you (earth) died tonight
there'll be no tomorrow...
kick..
Thank you for stopping in.
Not to make haste. but the world would indeed be here tomorrow if she died because the world did not explode and pulverize into nothing I did not say that. I simply said she died. Eventually but over time all life would cease to exist. but there would still be a tomorrow. as the storms on earth increase with intensity eventually just wiping out everything. but see man is so narrow minded he would just continue on with his normal day to day things and not even notice if the earth died in fact it seems like that now with the soils of the earth so polluted the waters the very air. she is as bout dead now as she can be she cannot no longer sustain her natural beauty. thank you for stopping in.. Hope this makes sense..
kick...
IF I DIE TONIGHT""
So very touchy Kick. I am sure she will.
I am ready to sit down with you and SA on the project. Please let me know what to do. The sooner the better that we start.
Thank you so much \kick.
Phyllis
would you remember me tomorrow
You bet we would remember you...This is very good dark poetry.
Ty for your direct yet gentle reminder of the choices we've made and can still make, one way or the other, in relationship to our earth and to one another.
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if you want the stereo you have to take the 26 kids that goes with the stereo you have eni meni myni mo just to name a few. if you really want it that bad i'll have to send it over with a mini van..
kick...
thank you that is the sweetest chocolate covered comment I have read. I must say Thank you.
kickit
when I was typing my response to you I knew or thought that this is what you were refering to as meaning tomorrow in out own life or our future life as humans on earth. this way of meaning your right there would not be no tomorrow eventually life could not continue way it is going.. thank you for your reply back and thank you for your added comments.
kickit.
kickit
Rob
you know of course we would never forget about you either, thank you for your gracious comment. take care my friend.
kickit.
How are you? Still trucking? I live both in mid west and California now. ..semi retired.
I miss our old group. ..
Phyllis
Thanks for the comment..
Just left Bronx NY this last week.mans own desires has and is bringing this great place we call earth and home to a ruin.
Have another poem called earths revenge believe you would get an enjoyment out of that as well.
Mike
Take care Michael. .