Yankee this is truly an excellent poem,why should the green eyed monster raise its head,we are all human,jealousy rules in the heart of fools,nothing is achieved by it except loss of love and friends.It is the world's worst malady and causes so much pain and damage.
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 26, 2012
Hi Yankee,
Great sonnet mate...the green eyed monster. So true.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 26, 2012
Hi Yankee
What a superb sonnet: The general tenor is faultless. A fine write.
This is a lovely sonnet Yankee about a very unlovely state of mind. The state of jealousy is a difficult one to be in. I remember the words 'Be careful what you wish for' when I was a child. It's so true, as unless we could walk in someone else's shoes we really have no idea what it's like to be them and have what they have.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMay 26, 2012
Most wise advice Yank..and then some.
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 26, 2012
Love it yankee4u
bjallenunknown, Washington USAMay 26, 2012
very true sonnet yankey the green eyes of jealousy is a vile creature
Invidia is a sad state for anyone to be in or to witness.
Great write!! :)
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMay 27, 2012
The ghost of disharmony still seems to be haunting the corridors of PC trying to taunt some with insinuations indirectly.This is a good write for awareness. Thank you Yankee for the insight.
The ghosts of disharmony seems to be still haunting the corridors of PC with their insinuations.Excellent write of the unpleasantness of jealousy.It can cause irrevocable damage.Thank you for sharing this Yankee.
Hi, Yankee4you, a vile spit of envy... does evoke images of the Hissing...serpent. Thanks for sharing this sonnet form put to good use. May love and some good remedy reign.
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Great sonnet mate...the green eyed monster. So true.
What a superb sonnet: The general tenor is faultless. A fine write.
Best wishes
Bill
Great write!! :)
Rob
The ghosts of disharmony seems to be still haunting the corridors of PC with their insinuations.Excellent write of the unpleasantness of jealousy.It can cause irrevocable damage.Thank you for sharing this Yankee.
a vile spit of envy... does evoke images of the Hissing...serpent. Thanks for sharing this sonnet form put to good use. May love and some good remedy reign.