This old coffee pot needs cleaning but I guess it can wait til tomorrow The weeds have grown up around the house and the bank won't let me borrow You're the last tear shed in my weary heart and has long since dried All that's left is this old man whose youthful years have died It's not good to live alone taunted by so many regrets An apology to the Almighty for renigging on my debts Still, a memory of you slips into my day and I toy with some truth or lie But that kiss from you can never deny you're the last tear I ever cried~
Hi, cafetwo2010, Still, a memory of you slips into my day and I toy with some truth or lie... A very moving write.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Ahrya' Thanks sweet..Glad you checked in..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Dementia' Thanks bro..Us guys can relate to a lot of this stuff..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
TY bjallen' Hard to forget that last tear..Be at peace dear..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Beautifulyou' You ladies with that last kiss is a real killer..I'm a wreck..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Celtic' I'll try not to torment the maidens with to much strong emotions..But I gotta roll with the punches..Thanks much for your interest..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
TY Kick' I'm no legend Kick..just a wandering knight looking for a clue..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Jeddah' Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Where have you been?? I thought this poem might flush you out of hiding..Is that two sugars, or three to go?
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty Rob...Some stuff just falls together like a good oil painting..Thanks again bro.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 27, 2012
Ty gnj' Most appreciated dear..Haven't seen much of you lately??
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 27, 2012
A great poem loaded to the brim with emotion
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 28, 2012
Ty Steve' Thanks bro..
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAMay 28, 2012
Sir cafe two for the life of me i think i lost my best friend in yhe world of intriguing love affairs.
But of course one way or another it has to surface out from your heart.
I am so happy for you and that tear gives you the pleasure of grieving then so be it. I pray soon it will be joy and laughter.
With love
windy
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USADec 16, 2016
Marikia.. Wow! Seems like a million years ago since I wrote this. I remember it now, and I think what makes this poem connect is that the physical environment matches the sentiments expressed in being tired and worn out. 'This old coffee pot, the 'weeds have grown up, 'the bank won't let me borrow.' Everything is tired, old and run down waiting to fade away just like the old man. Thank you for finding this one too. Cafe
Very sad You've come a long way in 5 years - lots of poet friends stateside and across the pond. Everyone loves Cafe and especially his Castle parties (don't forget the herbal tea). However, we need to have a talk about this bamboo cage business!
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never deny you're the last
tear I ever cried~
That ending is beyond moving Cafe,
beyond moving
kickit
never deny you're the last
tear I ever cried~
aaaahhhh,,romantic jim,,i need more cafe to go for it
Rob
Still, a memory of you slips into my day and I toy with some truth or lie... A very moving write.
But of course one way or another it has to surface out from your heart.
I am so happy for you and that tear gives you the pleasure of grieving then so be it. I pray soon it will be joy and laughter.
With love
windy
Wow! Seems like a million years ago since I wrote this.
I remember it now, and I think what makes this poem
connect is that the physical environment matches
the sentiments expressed in being tired and worn out.
'This old coffee pot, the 'weeds have grown up, 'the
bank won't let me borrow.' Everything is tired, old and
run down waiting to fade away just like the old man.
Thank you for finding this one too.
Cafe
You've come a long way in 5 years - lots of poet friends stateside and across the pond. Everyone loves Cafe and especially his Castle parties (don't forget the herbal tea). However, we need to have a talk about this bamboo cage business!
Kathy
Kathy
Cafe