~within the flames~

danced fire upon air, shuffled dirt imprinted of mocc, summoned spirit in elder filled chant, praise of life collective soul's demon'd spirits good one's fight, of the land of the night of the breath n tribal right, cultured past in conflicted way ever present here this day, danced foot an fire will not tire collective souls now aim higher, n in the face of the flames inspired elder thought, a culture past . . . . to present day~
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Posted: Oct 2009
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Comments (8)

andrew149
It certainly does my friend, and wonderful it is too....thankyou.....andrew
Bentlee
Ty Andrew for your comment an your continued support in my writing. It means alot to me. Cheers my friend:)
poetengineer
thanks for this wonderful words , my mindful writer
Bentlee
Khaled i truly enjoyed writing this one as I wrote it I also lived in it too:) ty my friend.
sshore
i find this one so very magical the quality the imagery
thankyou for sharing and bless you.
bouquet
Bentlee
ty sshore i like your comment very much, yes it is sort of magical in its wayhug
jazzy75
Bentlee, this is a really cool poem. I like it very much :-)
Bentlee
thanks Jazzy for your comments, I'm happy you enjoyed this as much as I did writing ithug
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