tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKAug 25, 2010
Brilliant....great 'attitude' but use it wisely and here's a that it goes the way right round This time
Best wishes
TP4G
ApostopheBoksburg, Gauteng South AfricaAug 25, 2010
What i like best is the shaved pate!
Suits you - now i'm going to check out your profile - for that reason - so don't get scared.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 26, 2010
This is really good, glad I delved it out. Sort of cool, laid back passion c*m metaphysics.
opentuitKnoxville, Tennessee USAAug 26, 2010
"Supply me with your fear Need to understand your cheerless tear"
This affected me... so few people really want to know another's pain... because even the knowing hurts. Too many people just want others to Cheer Up and be pleasant company... and they miss that rare opportunity to know someone deeply.
Thanks for posting this!
tomboygirllarnaca, Larnaca CyprusAug 26, 2010
Deep and passionate poem affecting me as I read to the end,thankyou for sharing stressfree
ben999dungarvan, Waterford IrelandAug 26, 2010
nicely expressed, surrender your dreams, that last thing o be surrendered, although some give up, the curse of analyses, to understand sometimes, is to surrender.
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Rob
This poem is from a while ago...when what seemed to be---was always better than nothing at all...and now it's come full circle again hahahaha
Love all your poetry
This time
Best wishes
TP4G
Suits you - now i'm going to check out your profile - for that reason - so don't get scared.
Need to understand your cheerless tear"
This affected me... so few people really want to know another's pain... because even the knowing hurts. Too many people just want others to Cheer Up and be pleasant company... and they miss that rare opportunity to know someone deeply.
Thanks for posting this!