a drop of rain swirling clouds energy being released that's falling to the ground no puddles can be found a drop of rain carving it's path in the soils under ground a path being carved for others to follow united they become a river is formed carving a path to it's freedom to the open seas it will finally be set free
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Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
it takes only one person to start the path but takes others to unite and be a force to freedom.
So very true Kick; sometimes it takes a while for that one person to start the flow; but once momentum is achieved the whole thing flows as one. Thank you for your poem
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 10, 2012
What a nice way of expressing those thoughts and i truly agree Mike
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJun 10, 2012
Very well put ... sometimes it takes very little to get people to unite and start a flood ... hopefully for the betterment of mankind
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 11, 2012
Amen Kick
I am back and yet there is nothing more I like than be back in the Down Under..
Windy
OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJun 11, 2012
Kickit I like it. Only when we lose ourselves in the whole we become free.
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJun 13, 2012
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thank you jazzy glad you like it
kickit..
I am back and yet there is nothing more I like than be back in the Down Under..
Windy
I like it.
Only when we lose ourselves in the whole we become free.
Wonderful kickit! Ty.