becoming one

a drop of rain
swirling clouds
energy being released
that's falling to the ground
no puddles can be found
a drop of rain
carving it's path
in the soils under ground
a path being carved
for others to follow
united they become
a river is formed
carving a path
to it's freedom
to the open seas
it will finally be
set free
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
it takes only one person to start the path but takes others to unite and be a force to freedom.

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Redex
applause I so agree, nice way to put itteddybear
jazzy75
I agree! Nicely done kickit.handshake
kickit22
glad you like it red. thank you..

thank you jazzy glad you like it



teddybear teddybear

kickit..
orientalkoru
So very true Kick; sometimes it takes a while for that one person to start the flow; but once momentum is achieved the whole thing flows as one. Thank you for your poemteddybear
Poetnumber1
What a nice way of expressing those thoughts and i truly agree Mikecheers
steve1223
Very well put ... sometimes it takes very little to get people to unite and start a flood ... hopefully for the betterment of mankind

cheers
windyweatherly
Amen Kick

I am back and yet there is nothing more I like than be back in the Down Under..

Windy
Ondos
Kickit
I like it.
Only when we lose ourselves in the whole we become free.
Ahyra
Very nice kickit thumbs up teddybear
beautifulyou
I love your analogy.

Wonderful kickit! Ty.

bouquet
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