dont u ever feel so lonely that you wonder what its like just to have someone special to be whit you to hold you tight do you ever wonder why it takes so much to say just a simple word just a second from your day do you ever feels so hurt and lost upon the pain you think you you could end it there as you stumble trough the rain no where left to go no one left to call a whole story to tell someone a heart full of sorrow to contain dont you ever want someone to tell it hurts someone to know how you feel someone so like your self like they could understand someone who knows the pain really is real someone like your self
CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAJun 12, 2012
Loneliness and a longing for companionship...I think we have all felt that from time to time. You expressed this feeling quite well. Thanks for sharing and welcome to poet's corner.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJun 12, 2012
You write a haunting poem that bears my soul too! So true .thanks
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 13, 2012
so true jarred those that have felt the pain can relate to others
jarred1OPeindhoven, North Brabant NetherlandsJun 13, 2012
thank you all i hope you like it
jarred1OPeindhoven, North Brabant NetherlandsAug 8, 2012
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