I am a face in a crowd,somewhere,someone. I am the rumbling mountain rage! Blowing hot temper flare! I am the desperate and lonely, Seeking and wanting badly. I am what I am and who I am! We are faces in the crowd,everywhere,everyone. We are the rumbling mountains rage! Blowing hot temper flares! We are the desperate and lonely, Searching and needing badly! We are what we are and who we are!
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Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
Dear SIR elo ,this is my take on your challenge . Forgive me if I veer off the given task as only simple my mind can reach. Call it lite version .
I had to take the challenge after reading yours...hhhmmm Morgen my friend...reading between the lines...still feeling blue eh? But at least you are writing again...it's good!
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJun 13, 2012
You are my rising sun koru san
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 13, 2012
And what a poem, visions of a volcano came to mind the mountains anger. and you depicted well, we all think we are the only ones alone BUT WE are faces in the crowd
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 13, 2012
One thing about you my dear Morgen is that you have a flair of making me always smile.
and your humility is a killer.
love it morgen. windy
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJun 13, 2012
Thanks redex and Windy , I am what I am ,wish to be something more with someone ,anyone . If it brings a smile on you ,then a kiss will be fine with me ! You are the 1st to welcome me here ...too bad the distance or with your man's permission ,would give you a warm teddy hug! Redex one of my sweetest poet whom I admire !
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 13, 2012
One thing about you my dear Morgen is that you have a flair of making me always smile.
haha being honest about how you feel is a lot more important than sticking to the task at hand. It is a good poem Morgan,indeed many of us are at times lonely or angry, feel faceless or lost in a crowd. At least I know, I have definitely felt these things before. thx for sharing....elo..
CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAJun 13, 2012
Nicely done Morgen. Ok to veer of the path of a challenge as they are full of inspiration to us all. We each take our thoughts and twists to a given challenge and the creativity shines through.
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJun 13, 2012
Well, there's time for everything Well done Morgen
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and your humility is a killer.
love it morgen. windy
Redex one of my sweetest poet whom I admire !
and your humility is a killer.
love it morgen. windy