your name

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Jun 2012 722 Views 9 comments

your name

floating butterfly in the air
swirling sand in the wind
etching your name
a falling leaf dotting the i
blowing across the sky
grain by grain
your name falls in my hand
touching my heart
written in my soul
a midnight kiss
crosses the T

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Posted: Jun 2012

About this poem:

yes this is a re-post.

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Comments (9)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 28, 2012

Hi Mike an engaging and beautiful piece,i see you write more often..probably due to a free schedule,all the more i have'nt read this piece,all the best friend

M.M

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 28, 2012

hi ptnmbr 1

oh yes you have read and not only read you have also commented on this piece. i wanted to re post this. one of the comments that was made i wanted to erase. i would have loved to saved your comment tho. you gave me the choir not just the choir but a quad choir which meant alot to me. thanks for stopping in and reading again..

kick..

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJun 28, 2012

I really like this one, thanks for re posting, I don't remember reading it before, whatever though it is still excellent. Andrew...

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 28, 2012

hi Andrew.

thank you so kind for your comments. Not many people read this the first time it only attracted just a small number of readers but that's not the reason why I reposted this. as many of my poems have been short lived on the first page. lol.. but it is all good.

kick..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 28, 2012

that is perfect poet. now i can cherish your comment without having the one comment be a bothersome to my eyes.

I must say it has been a while since this was out. it is hard to remember all of what has beeen posted on here.

kickit..

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 28, 2012

Yay

glad you appreciated my appreciationof this appreciated write

Must leave now until next we meet,take care my friend

M.M

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJun 28, 2012

Hi, kickit22,
There is a sweetness in the floating, swirling, etching...grain by grain in this verse written with soul, that certainly touches the heart.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 28, 2012

take care ptnmbr1 we will catch you another time. enjoy..kick..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 28, 2012

Hello Gnj

this is kinda funny, was just reflecting on my older poems and just read one of your older comments and was thinking of where you had gone and poof i saw another comment was added here. to my surprise there you are. thank you for stopping in with a sweet comment.