Kickits challenge

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Jul 2012 757 Views 20 comments

Kickit's challenge..

Author: cafetwo2010

A thousand steps walking
a crooked fence
Catlike I step in this
fog so dense
Shall I dash my foot on
this white-washed
picket
My critics say 'Yes',
For surely he'll
Kickit!'

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Posted: Jul 2012

About this poem:

Hail Sir Kickit!!

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Comments (20)

MottaMantua, Lombardy ItalyJul 2, 2012

Superb writing, as always Cafe provides. It's good to see you, old friend. Ok, now you have a question!

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Beautiful, I enjoy this piece of work!

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 2, 2012

I enjoyed this piece also,clever and brilliant write

M.M

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 2, 2012

Super thanks my friend! Hail Kickit!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 2, 2012

TY PoetNumber1' I didn't wanna think to hard about this one..Just something cute..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 2, 2012

I forgot to say,'Super thanks Motta!'

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 2, 2012

Yes it comes so easy when you put your own flare to it and i see you fit so snug within your shoes that it comes out naturally,extemporaneously...you always know how to give a smile

M.M

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 2, 2012

A thousand steps walking
a crooked fence
Catlike I step in this
fog so dense
Shall I dash my foot on
this white-washed
picket
My critics say 'Yes',
For surely he'll
Kickit!'

Dear cafe...I love it

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 2, 2012

Ty Odette' I liked yours better..

OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJul 2, 2012

Love it Cafe.

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAJul 2, 2012

Really cool write cafe

Enjoyed this Ty for sharing

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 2, 2012

Nicely done cafetwo!! ...please don't kickit quite yet....for a cat only has 9 lives.

CelticPoet12Prescott, Arizona USAJul 2, 2012

Clever Cafe!~ VERY clever. NICE write.

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 3, 2012

wonderful poem sir cafe

now i need more coffee for that

windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJul 3, 2012

Dear Cafe,

A thousand steps walking
a crooked fence
Catlike I step in this
fog so dense
Shall I dash my foot on
this white-washed
picket
My critics say 'Yes',
For surely he'll
Kickit!'

It is so dense and succint yet so full, and the ending, how fitting my friend. For our organizer leader's name even rhyme in it.

thanks,

Windy

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJul 3, 2012

Jim, you'll never lose your cleverness.... thus the reason you'll always be 'The King of the Cafe Castle!" Loved your approach to Kickit's challenge!! This is refreshing and good for the soul of poet's corner!!

kickit22auburn, Washington USAJul 3, 2012

Cafe!!

what can I say my friend!! you have took this thousand steps and kicked it out of the park right ontop of the white picket fence. I hope you got some stored away I don't think you will be having a family.

kickit.....

SundaySilenceLittle Gasparilla, Florida USAJul 3, 2012

Whewwwwwwwwww, good one!

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanJul 4, 2012

Interesting way of connecting the image to the challenger 'Kickit' ;)

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJul 4, 2012

I agree with these comments about your unique way of telling Mr. Cafe that he'd better have 'some' stored away.... I'm busting my trousers in laughter once again.... "THIS" is why I LOVE POET'S CORNER!!!!!!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 4, 2012

Thanks again my beloved poet friends. You have all been my inspiration for a long long time. I was a peasant when I knocked on Poet's Corner door and you cast away my 29 cent Wall Mart flip flops and adorned me in royal garb. Hail most faithful subjects!

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