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just wanted to say

I am so astounded how my 2 little lines
have got such a reaction not just from
one or two or even a handful of poets
here on the corner but from everybody

I am so deeply touched by the

poetry that was created
poets who created them

this little challenge has brought us to a different level, far more
important then friends and family but has brought us on a level
of solidarity, unity.
2 little lines and so many, oh so many brilliant inspired poetry that was created from this challange.

each and every one of you

THANK YOU!!!!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2012
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WHAT MORE CAN I SAY.

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lucy1777
No thank you kickit!thumbs up The turnout you got off those two lines an that one challenge was....AMAZING!balloons
Odette67
Hi Kick,

We have all had such fun doing this...And yes, a feeling of unity too...Who would have believed those two little lines you thought about could have brought such a great response. laugh applause bouquet hug purple heart
kickit22
LUCY!!
teddybear hug

what more can I say!

kickit...
kickit22
LADY ODETTE!

YOUR WORDS SUM EVERYTHING UP!

hug teddybear

KICKIT...
paloma66
Thanks kickit with all the hassles travelling around yet you had time to write those two lines that stirred us up on PC and brought out all the feelings and created a spirit of bonhomie.You are anangel
kickit22
ahhhh Paloma, you know how it goes gotta free the mind while the wind is blowing in the ear.. rolling on the floor laughing don't ask me where i got that I 'll just tell ya, don't aske me where I got that..rolling on the floor laughing probably from sleep depervation...lol...thank you paloma you are angel yourself with all of your contributions to this little 2 line challange....

kickit..
paloma66
Hope you will catch up on lost sleep.
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kickit22
well not sure if that will happen tonight with all these fireworks going off..... I wonder tho if somebody else or even me come up with another 2 liner that will hold the pc in spellbound...i still am in awwwweee of the affect this carried even now it still lingers and no not the smell....rolling on the floor laughing
windyweatherly
My dearest Kickit, I might add: Indeed you got my brain on the overdrive. Like I said, it is so POERFUL AND POTENT it can lead to so many direction. I am still writing and I think I will dedicate a BOOK and I will title it: "KICKIT'S REVVING MOOD".

Anyways what is so rare is the exploding substance of the act of WALKING A THOUSAND STEPS ON A CROCKED FENCE. it depicgts some sort of commitment to do so, why? there goes the reasons. It is in this question I asked the first time I read it that got me into so many WILD, I mean really wild direction. then CROCKED FENCE. Why crocked? why not straingt? and why on a fence, why not on the trail or some sort of road?

Anyways, my dearest Kick, I have so far written 13 different pieces attributed to your TWO POWERFUL, FAMOUS LINES.

Thanks so much.

Your friend

Windy
kickit22
oh dear windy,

I think everybody can relate to a crooked fence, that is why this has been over whelmingly successful. it represents boarders, barriers, life's struggles of a unbalanced journey in one's life, it represents humbleness and success of reaching the end a crooked fence climbs mountains and crosses into and over creeks and ponds, and most important it represents a string of journy whhen one finishes the end it gives them something to look back on and reflect what it took them to finish the one thousandth step.

kickit..
Yankee4you
Kickit...You are at the heart of this whole site.....from all of us to you....thank you....comfort
kickit22
Yankee,

cheers handshake you are so

very welcome!!

and

Thank You

for your participation!!

kickit..
Poetnumber1
Thankyou Mike for the challenge,i thought that the challenge was most indeed a brilliant one that sparked a response that you never expected.You are brilliant my friend..cheerscheers A super day to you...M.Mboogie violin very happy
kickit22
it is beyond words poet, beyond words that I can describe
it will be forever in my memory of the most memorable time ever in my mind... thank you for your participation poet applause applause

kickit..
gnj4u
Hi, kickit22,
Thank YOU for offering up your wonderful lines and sharing poetry and your great heart with us!
Poetnumber1
It was an honourhandshake angel M.M
kickit22
Hi GNJ4U

Thank you!!! dear for your participation in this 2 line challenge
but you know what is funny. I was looking back and I was trying to count how many times my 2 lines changed..
my original 2 lines were suppose to be as follows

A thousand steps
walking along a crooked fence

but when i posted it, it came out

A thousand steps
walking a crooked fence

but then when i done my take on it, I wrote in my version

A thousand steps
along a crooked fence..

geess not sure what going on in my heart or mind.. rolling on the floor laughing
windyweatherly
well my dear kick let it flow.

Don't try to know. It is when you are unaware that beautiful things happen.

Thank you so much my dear dear Kick for this unexpected flow of ideas coming from your powerful two lines. The unity it brought to our cohesive uited family. Its like all of us went to a party an we all drank in the same cup.

Whata show of love, fun and unity. Like our best of the best M M said: You are brilliant

Windy
kickit22
poet1... your kind words makes it all worth it..


and windy


your kindness is filled with passionate expressive love of life and the human affect.

kickit..hug
cherryreggae
Thanks so much kick!!! Like everyone else, I really enjoyed this challenge & being part of something so "BIG". It's amazing reading all the poems and how two of your lines, made such a difference, in all of us!!!! Sincere thanks!!! Cheriexx...applause cheering head banger thumbs up handshake hug cheers teddybear
kickit22
cherry hello dear..


and thank you for being and making this what it was. it is just not one person, no it is not! it is everybody, who entered and conquered this challenge, with authority. it just show that even in tense times, we all can come together and unite as one, regardless of language, race, religion. peace can be had, that is what the world of poetry has to offer.. teddybear bouquet peace hug dancing

kickit..
CelticPoet12
Hey Kickit, I really enjoyed the challenge and was floored to see all the comments and the stir of excitement. THANK YOU!!! for inciting this creative ourtburst. SO much fun. On my way home tomorrow. I'm about ready. Been traveling for slightly over two weeks now. There's no place like home. LOL. More soon. Celticcheers
cherryreggae
I 100% agree....peace thumbs up peace thumbs up
jena_massie
thumbs up
swade777
The challenge was nothing less than 'inspiring' - You got the inspiration started, but with each and every submission, the inspiration greW, grEW, gREW, and continued to GROW! It was like watching a well planted garden!
You, Mike - tilled the fertile soil of the mind, the creative seeds of poets far and wide began to germinate, the result was a beautiful harvest of original creativity with color, texture, warmth, humor, imagination, and depth. In the end, we were all privileged to sit around the overflowing cornucopia partaking of the fruits that were so abundantly harvested and unselfishly shared. An awesome experience indeed!! Thanks Mike!!! hug handshake thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
jena_massie
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seerie
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