The sacred river flows to the unknown lands The undying feeling of pain and remorse A chilling wind blows by destroying life Through the valley of death and shadow To lands unknown my spirit goes
A piece of me wants to go back A piece of me wants to go on A piece of me wants to die A piece of me wants to live A piece of me is dead A piece of me is alive
The past cannot change even though I want it to So many mistakes so many bad things have happened Too many things have gone wrong Change is imminent Death is certain to a longer path Life to one that cannot be told
Time for me to pass on Not to death but to an uncertainty Madness and insanity plague my soul The time for change is gone Life seems to go wrong and I know it is Madness surrounds the sparrow Death surrounds the crow
My time has come I must move on but I can't Let go of time I am working to go But that piece of me still defies
Maybe you should strive to keep that piece of you defiant. A highly evocative work of language art. Your words ring with sincerity as if spoken by an ancient shaman and carried by a universal wind. Keep writing.
AngelicGreenEyesBourne, Lincolnshire, England UKJul 13, 2012
an excellent write.Often i find myself saying *if only i had done this that way*
"The past cannot change even though I want it to So many mistakes so many bad things have happened Too many things have gone wrong Change is imminent"
Always take heart in knowing, no matter what struggles you have had to go through,no matter how much pain have had to endure...you never will have gone through anything in vain.... everything that we experience on out pathway in life takes us on a journey of learning for our onward journey
An excellent masterful write "Bravo"
Kind regards Angel
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 14, 2012
A piece of you is a piece of me ! EVERYONE is a piece too ! We are pieces of almighty , You,me and the river of life , Pieces in the making ,coming and going. This is my piece for you! Ha ha my tribute to you and yours Lord skywalker ;-)
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"The past cannot change even though I want it to
So many mistakes so many bad things have happened
Too many things have gone wrong
Change is imminent"
Always take heart in knowing, no matter what struggles you have had to go through,no matter how much pain have had to endure...you never will have gone through anything in vain.... everything that we experience on out pathway in life takes us on a journey of learning for our onward journey
An excellent masterful write "Bravo"
Kind regards
Angel
EVERYONE is a piece too !
We are pieces of almighty ,
You,me and the river of life ,
Pieces in the making ,coming and going.
This is my piece for you!
Ha ha my tribute to you and yours Lord skywalker ;-)