Waiting Sonnet

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Jul 2012 701 Views 12 comments

Waiting.........Sonnet

Lovely thoughts lay in waiting
Engaging my mind about you
There will be no hesitating
In essence of something true

Never will there need to be
Crooked words spoken in vain
Only the air of honesty
To keep our vision sane

Together we will find
Everything an more
United by our kind
To venture out loves door

I've been waiting for so long
For you to show an make me strong

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jul 2012

About this poem:

For lucy's challenge ...........not sure if this is the right structure but it is what it is ....

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Comments (12)

lucy1777Broken Arrow Oklahoma, Oklahoma USAJul 16, 2012

It is a lovely sonnet. If you would like I can send you a easy guide to sonnet writing that was given to me by Mr. Fellsman it really breaks it down well

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJul 16, 2012

Thanks lucy ....glad you liked it ........uhm its ok i can google it if needed ....but thanks for the offer regards n61

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJul 16, 2012

Bravo for the courage of trying! I'm not brave enough to step into this difficult ring! Anyone that's willing to try their hand at something new deserves a medal!
I fear that the only 'medal' that "I" would get (for butchering the poor Sonnet) would be in the form of LEAD - coming straight from the end of a Gun Barrel City!! Great job on your contribution!!

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJul 17, 2012

Good onya swade thanks for the encouragement .........regards n61