I look in the mirror just to see my eyes.. all the pain that's laids deep down inside... I feel as if time had stopped.. eveytime I think of u I lose my breath like I've been shot The way we use to walk along the beach How I layed u down then in ur ear I slowly preach
Without you I'm cold You shine like the sun..pure gold Ill hold on to you with all my might Baby..YOU are my light!
Then I would slowly kiss u from your lips down to it.. My heart would beat so fast I would sit I would try not to think about you Cause your finally gone its true You left me when I only theated u like a queen bee.. Don't worry time will fly. Later You will b the one wit tears in ur eyes And ill have me someone that I can call all mine.. as I walked outside a beautiful butterfly flew right by .. then just then my world lite up...
everything felt like it was in place.. She moved with such grace The moon shinning on her face This is a chance I'm gonna take It wasn't a mistake After the day of the beautiful butterfly She never left myside Every night I hold her tight It felt more than right We closed our eyes And hoped we would never have to say our good byes
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this really quick I'm no poem writer just like puttin thing together:)
Well young lady.... one thing you'll NEVER find here at Poet's Corner is 'PERFECTION'.... we are all just a bunch of broken, bruised, tarnished, experienced, people doing our best to be one big happy, forgiving, tolerant family of creative writers. As you read the contributions of others, take note of their methods, their spelling, their subject matter, their style..... learn from them and watch your own talents begin to improve and develop! And lastly....... Welcome to Poet's Corner!
loriilondon, Greater London, England UKJul 23, 2012
Ah its a good write, very unique how you switch tense's somes in future some in past.
Hi grose.......I enjoyed this poem and I just wrote a poem about butterflies and I like how you expressed your feelings and thoughts and butterflies are symbols of us....thank you for sharing welcome to pc...
GroseOPManchester, Connecticut USAJul 24, 2012
Thanks guys when i wrote it.. I was writing as i go i didmt take the chance to double check the spelling lol i did now but i just do it for fun so to me its not that biggie:)) but once again thanks!!! I didnt think it would get read
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