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I look in the mirror just to see my eyes..
all the pain that's laids deep down inside...
I feel as if time had stopped..
eveytime I think of u I lose my breath like I've been shot
The way we use to walk along the beach
How I layed u down then in ur ear I slowly preach

Without you I'm cold
You shine like the sun..pure gold
Ill hold on to you with all my might
Baby..YOU are my light!

Then I would slowly kiss u from your lips down to it..
My heart would beat so fast I would sit
I would try not to think about you
Cause your finally gone its true
You left me when I only theated u like a queen bee..
Don't worry time will fly.
Later You will b the one wit tears in ur eyes
And ill have me someone that I can call all mine..
as I walked outside a beautiful butterfly flew right by .. then just then my world lite up...

everything felt like it was in place..
She moved with such grace
The moon shinning on her face
This is a chance I'm gonna take
It wasn't a mistake
After the day of the beautiful butterfly
She never left myside
Every night I hold her tight
It felt more than right
We closed our eyes
And hoped we would never have to say our good byes
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this really quick I'm no poem writer just like puttin thing together:)

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Grose
I don't write peoms so it ain't perfect:)grin
swade777
Well young lady.... one thing you'll NEVER find here at Poet's Corner is 'PERFECTION'.... we are all just a bunch of broken, bruised, tarnished, experienced, people doing our best to be one big happy, forgiving, tolerant family of creative writers. As you read the contributions of others, take note of their methods, their spelling, their subject matter, their style..... learn from them and watch your own talents begin to improve and develop! And lastly....... Welcome to Poet's Corner! hug
lorii
Ah its a good write, very unique how you switch tense's somes in future some in past.
cherryreggae
Hi grose.......I enjoyed this poem and I just wrote a poem about butterflies and I like how you expressed your feelings and thoughts and butterflies are symbols of us....thank you for sharing welcome to pc...hug handshake bouquet
Grose
Thanks guys when i wrote it.. I was writing as i go i didmt take the chance to double check the spelling lol i did now but i just do it for fun so to me its not that biggie:)) but once again thanks!!! I didnt think it would get read
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