Withdrawal

(This is actually a song i am working on it's going to have a blues/soul beat to it, I have only started writing my own stuff so testing the waters bit nervous about writing lyrics etc because you are putting so much of your personal experiences into it.... anyway this is one of them)

Your love wasn't a drug, it was more like a poison!
Rushing through my veins was this numbing sensation,
I didn't know what to do the day you walked away,
Cause babe i thought that you were the one that was here to stay

Now I'm buried alive down in the darkest depths,
Your last kiss to me was the kiss of death,
You walked away from me leaving me to rot in this hell,

And baby baby baby, now I'm dying, from the withdrawal

But there will be, no more tears, no pining, no screaming,or crying,
Just this sickening addiction that I must escape.

How could everything, not be as it seems,
the love you gave to me was laced with lies, cut through with deceit you got me hooked on your high, knowing i would fall and now baby,
I'm dying from the withdrawal
Your love wasn't a drug
It was a poison
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
This is a song about first loves. The ones you think you will never get over! The ones that, when they walk away your whole body is in such a shock, you feel dead and lifeless. You get angry, thinking about all the things they said to you, making you fall harder. When inside they knew it was ending, and they were walking away.

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lucy1777
Such emotions you put in your poems! Welcome to poets cornerteddybear
notforyou
Thank you so much ... delighted to be here :)
cherryreggae
I think this will make a great song not for you...luv it very deep and emotionally connecting !!! Thank you for sharing, now get it out there!!!handshake thumbs up head banger head banger applause
notforyou
Thanks ill make sure to put a link up when its finished :)
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