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Message from the Rain ...

What is said by the rain on the earth?

The rain said that there must be dry on the end.
Its was telling us about the wound at each point of the water. Hard hit by the earth's crust.

Its likes to sing about new season of prayer and mantra.
The rain recited the solemn verses lifted up.

A variety of styles. Layered message.
But, for me the rain had one mission: TO REMOVE THE TRACES ... !
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
That something about it is problematic, which we call its meaning.
That this meaning does not lie in it but outside it.

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intan_redapple
NIO ..., I enjoyed this very much. stepping off life's carousel is brilliantly metaphorical...what we often see and experience or want to call reality is sometimes often fantasy or illusional, that what's in a hearts is often only true to us...
Fellsman
Hi intan redapple

What an interesting comment - would you care to check out a comment left by Yankee4you on one of my poems laugh


Yankee4you St. Albans, Vermont USA
Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:08 PM GMT


Bill, I enjoyed this very much. stepping off life's carousel is brilliantly metaphorical...what we often see and experience or want to call reality is sometimes often fantasy or illusional, that what's in a hearts is often only true to us...

Have fun you two, it is always a pleasure to welcome newcomers to this site.... wink

Regards

Bill
plainlyjune
fellman rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing brilliant!
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