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Pritel

They came and gone like
the algid breeze
from the sea

it was a refreshing
but alluring mask
that came
to be

from the twisting and grinding
wheels of the soft coarse
sands of time,attempting
to find its
place

they dissipated
without a
trace

now sitting in this cold
dreary locality alone and
disconnected

feeling of surmise, rejected
and unauthenticated
ties

the future is bleak on this
sea of tinted ash
and debree

dismal and disconcerted
with this unrimitting
demise
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
just of feeling disconnected with the world and those around it. the trials faced alone and the unrelenting battle between self and reality.

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Odette67
from the twisting and grinding
wheels of the soft coarse
sands of time,attempting
to find its
place

Beautiful poetry. thumbs up purple heart
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