~in your eyes~

At a distance
They grace your sorrowful soul
Your pockets are filled with nothing but weight
A past that evolves life in your time.

teardrops trail, then drip off your chin.

Starts at the end
The end now begins.

Those tears that stained innocent cheeks
Crashed through your soul, leaving deep rooted stain
Stain that can colour
What life passe's your way.

Mind block grabs hold
as, you de...fend your soul
words that spew from your needed sealed lips
razor sharp blades, slashing under hips.

Hurt past, time, thrown to the air
your victim defends with defensive care
till your spew is acidic on
what they've done
for you!

The stain that you throw
it's your's......did you know
your victim know's nothing
as your soul is unleashed.

Your next set up dates
will never follow through
to a second night out
it
will never be New!



~Bentlee~
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
get over yourself! Start treating people fair, without having to put potential future mates in jeopardy of your issues! That would be like trading the best person in your life...............for a cigarette. Meaning a crutch! To keep your issues........living!

Cheers everyone and find a way past your past into your awating future.....................

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lucy1777
Well said and well done Bentlee!thumbs up
Redex
Bentlee loved this the true nature of someteddybear
Bentlee
ty Lucy and Redex, my reason for this write is that I became single in 2000, dated a few women over the years, and the ones that I really liked, I paid the price of their past that they never had the where withall to deal with before making themselves available. Two of whom i would have spent a loving life with.

Ty for commenting and enjoying. wine hug


Jon
andrew149
well my friend, back with a vengeance hey! Great to see you and great to read you again, well said, well written....cheers mate...Andrewcool
Bentlee
lol, cheers mate, good to see you, trust all is well, ty for commenting and chat soon.

cheers
Happygolucky4u
The past is not always a bad thing. It has shaped the person I am now today. I do carry it with me. Proudly. No need to bother others with my past. They were not part of it. But strangly it seems to be the very thing (my past) that attracts men. The strength of character and the capacity to know how to love. I can't help but to wonder those with bad past is that what attracts some men to them teddybear
Bentlee
Hello Happy, I agree with you there, the past creates us as we are today. However if a person has a tarnished past and holds the anger and hostility, they will introduce it to future mates if they have never dealt with it, or perhaps if it is very deep rooted.

Ty for your thoughts here. wine hug
seerie
cheering cheering uh oh uh oh grin grin cool cool
seerie
i agree with Andrew

with a vengeance!

thankyougrin cool thumbs up thumbs up wow wow angel angel wave wave roll eyes conversing innocent gift gift applause confused uh oh doh gift yay cool
seerie
i agree with Andrew

with a vengeance!

thankyougrin cool thumbs up thumbs up wow wow angel angel wave wave roll eyes conversing innocent gift gift applause confused uh oh doh gift yay cool
seerie
my accursed cursor or is it the mouse is extremely enthusiastic it posts in multiples
sorry crying comfort doh thumbs up
jazzy75
Hey Bentlee self-awareness comes too late for many....eh. Great to see you here this evening...and posting.hug wine
Bentlee
well hello there Jazzy, see ur looking good as ever lol, ty and yes for sure and sad as to how much life is being missed out on

cheers my friend wine hug
seerie
self awareness depends on how much the spirit has been burnt in fire.. absence of light is darkness. funny tho' absence of darkness can never be Light.
gift wow
seerie
jazzy
i disagree

it is never too late!
not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.wow
seerie
jazzy
i disagree

it is never too late!
not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.wow
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