At a distance They grace your sorrowful soul Your pockets are filled with nothing but weight A past that evolves life in your time.
teardrops trail, then drip off your chin.
Starts at the end The end now begins.
Those tears that stained innocent cheeks Crashed through your soul, leaving deep rooted stain Stain that can colour What life passe's your way.
Mind block grabs hold as, you de...fend your soul words that spew from your needed sealed lips razor sharp blades, slashing under hips.
Hurt past, time, thrown to the air your victim defends with defensive care till your spew is acidic on what they've done for you!
The stain that you throw it's your's......did you know your victim know's nothing as your soul is unleashed.
Your next set up dates will never follow through to a second night out it will never be New!
~Bentlee~
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
get over yourself! Start treating people fair, without having to put potential future mates in jeopardy of your issues! That would be like trading the best person in your life...............for a cigarette. Meaning a crutch! To keep your issues........living!
Cheers everyone and find a way past your past into your awating future.....................
ty Lucy and Redex, my reason for this write is that I became single in 2000, dated a few women over the years, and the ones that I really liked, I paid the price of their past that they never had the where withall to deal with before making themselves available. Two of whom i would have spent a loving life with.
Ty for commenting and enjoying.
Jon
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 3, 2012
well my friend, back with a vengeance hey! Great to see you and great to read you again, well said, well written....cheers mate...Andrew
The past is not always a bad thing. It has shaped the person I am now today. I do carry it with me. Proudly. No need to bother others with my past. They were not part of it. But strangly it seems to be the very thing (my past) that attracts men. The strength of character and the capacity to know how to love. I can't help but to wonder those with bad past is that what attracts some men to them
Hello Happy, I agree with you there, the past creates us as we are today. However if a person has a tarnished past and holds the anger and hostility, they will introduce it to future mates if they have never dealt with it, or perhaps if it is very deep rooted.
Ty for your thoughts here.
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 3, 2012
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 3, 2012
i agree with Andrew
with a vengeance!
thankyou
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 3, 2012
i agree with Andrew
with a vengeance!
thankyou
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 3, 2012
my accursed cursor or is it the mouse is extremely enthusiastic it posts in multiples sorry
well hello there Jazzy, see ur looking good as ever lol, ty and yes for sure and sad as to how much life is being missed out on
cheers my friend
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 4, 2012
self awareness depends on how much the spirit has been burnt in fire.. absence of light is darkness. funny tho' absence of darkness can never be Light.
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 4, 2012
jazzy i disagree
it is never too late! not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 4, 2012
jazzy i disagree
it is never too late! not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.
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Ty for commenting and enjoying.
Jon
Ty for your thoughts here.
with a vengeance!
thankyou
with a vengeance!
thankyou
sorry
cheers my friend
i disagree
it is never too late!
not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.
i disagree
it is never too late!
not till the last sigh of death.. you never know huh.