All Alone

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Aug 2012 1,358 Views 25 comments

All Alone

I have nobody
I am somebody
I have the heart of desire
love to live I hate to live alone
My life is empty or is it full
I wander around no place to go
or a place of my destiny
Road is dark only lit up by the moons brite
or is the stars light brite enough to guide me
Hear the wind howl trees swaying
as my truck rolls by
I come to dead end
is this the farthest I go
Bridge is out road is closed
hit my brakes
my life is at its end
the road ends the journey begins
off to the right I drive
turning on a dirt road
where will it lead
Moon lite is all I have
Kicking up dust
I leave behind
My life continues on
a dirt bumpy road
but I live on all alone
traveling down the unknown

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Posted: Aug 2012

About this poem:

one of my favorite pieces. had to repost this also an older poem I wrote.

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Comments (25)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 4, 2012

i now see why this one is one of your favorites,this is a class write

You had me from me from start to finish.Love this one Mike and i reckon this one is among the charms of your published pieces...cheers friend

M.M

DementiaBelmont, Mississippi USAAug 4, 2012

Awesome poem Mike. Makes me reflect on my own life. I can relate to this poem very much. Thank you for posting it.

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 4, 2012

Us guys know all about this one Kick..Great job.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 4, 2012

Hello Mr. Poet

You are right this is one of what I do consider my most prized as this was written early in my beginnings as a writer. I do go back and read and re read this as it runs deep in my vains.
I am pleased you agree and see this as I do..

mike..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 4, 2012

Dementia

You are welcome! Man, I think this can relate to more of us then we know. I am glad you found a liking into one of my most cherished pieces that I hold close.

Kick..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 4, 2012

Thank You Cafe!!

we certainly do!. I tell ya. I am sure some woman out here can also.

Kick...

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAAug 4, 2012

Love this poem kick...makes you just think.about everything . Thanks for posting enjoyed this read

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 4, 2012

Hi Kickit

yep.. can relate to this great poem..and agree with poet, can see why its your favourite, gald you re-posted this ..
may you always have a clear road ahead

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaAug 5, 2012

Hi Kickit,

Well I must have missed it the first time, so I'm glad you resurrected it. An apt metaphor for life's trials and tribulations.

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 5, 2012

i do know and understand as well my dear cos our life leads to nowhere,,so keep we all keep going,live our life as we do now,we move on till we find the right one we call it our own home,in the arms of someone we do belong,,

this is an amazing beautiful peice from thee sir,,thanks for sharing,i love the read

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 5, 2012

Hello Cherry

To ponder on life, the road we are on, does give us pause if we are on the right one or not. glad you enjoyed my poem, Thank You.

Kick..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 5, 2012

Hi LadyMorgana

I have belief sometime in my life the dust will settle I will finally be on a clear smooth road one day. Thank You for stopping in and reading, glad you like my poem.

Kick..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 5, 2012

Hey Macduff

Good seeing your mug on my piece again, Well this piece was originally posted long long ago, think most people forgot about it. I am glad you like my poem.

Kick..

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 5, 2012

Great kick and score! A prefect poem that many can relate inclu me!
It's like looking in the mirror !
Thanks for reposting it and sorry For late comment ,kind of miss it along the way...

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaAug 6, 2012

Great metaphor...I've missed this one so thanks for re-posting it my friend...

seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 10, 2012

even if its not welcomed just want to

seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 10, 2012

told you all thanks for listening you are so kind!

seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 10, 2012

told you all thanks for listening you are so kind!

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 14, 2013

No wonder why it is one of your favourite ones. Very nice kickit

JimEeeNew Haven, Connecticut USAJan 15, 2013

Mike, I have visited your Dark Road many times.
So lonely is the darknest of the night,
There is no stars, it is not bright!
I am lonely in the crowd
and can relate to your poem.

Well done!
JimEee

Krc_1988Highland, Arkansas USAFeb 10, 2013

Nice poem, I think we all get this feeling sometimes.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 10, 2013

Hi kickit

I can relate to your poem on many levels...
Thank you for your thoughts,enjoyed reading

beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 10, 2013

'I have nobody
I am somebody'

.. an entrance that so effortlessly leads the reader into the poignancy of your write.

The entire piece is both somber and stirring. Sometimes I don't know how we find our way either, but we do

HairyBeaverCordoba, ArgentinaNov 1, 2016

Best poetry is created when one is feeling sad.

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 1, 2016

I love this. Hats off to my long time friend.
Sir Kickit of the royal castle.
Cafe

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