Slowly but surely you faded You sucked away my vanity Replaced it with insanity Low self-esteem could have been the death of me No self-confidence, always felt unworthy Knock off version of Barbie unoriginal beyond any doubt Black short and fat and everybody would act as if I didn’t stand out I was the only black girl in all my classes And I guess I fit the stereotypes of loving chicken and oh their favourite one "black girls have big asses" Blonde trophies to the right of me and smart brunettes and red heads to the left In front of me was their beauty Behind me lost in the shadows was my vanity Half dead still clinging on to old memories to survive Asking me how could I let any girl lower my ego when I won 6 beauty pageants since I was 5? The memory of being the little gymnastics queen Who can still do the same moves at nineteen Long hair and chocolate skin with a little sheen Put vanity back in business behind a protective screen I stopped eating I forced the weight to go I stopped crying and used make up to block them from seeing my true feelings I vowed I'll never let them show Strange how the bullying turned to loving when I started to look better how that happened? I’ll never know But all this vanity is like commodity that I’ll later exchange for modesty At least I can pretend I’ve never felt the wrath of despondency.
Freckles123Liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 6, 2012
Hi Lorii, Loved the write, thanks for sharing... from reading your poem I feel that even though you went through some real rough times with these girls name calling and belittling you, it is YOU who emerged victorious, as for all the wasted effort they put into trying to break you down, THEY DIDN'T, they just made you stronger and instilled a decency in you that will shine through your whole life long.. So.. you could toy with titles in the range of.. victorious.... you only made me stronger..... I am what I am... etc... just some random maybe's that I hope might inspire you to choose your title.. Best Wishes. Freckles
Another good poem written from deep within your soul. I would name this one Inner Battle of Self Worth. But what you don't realize is that you should not worry so much about your vanity. Set yourself free from others opinions of you. Even your own battle of your looks cause you're beautiful inside. You know I'm not blowing smoke up your a**. I'm being real with you.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 7, 2012
Hi Lori i once traveled that long and harsh world but these experiences only makes us stronger to continue to be ourselves and not a reflection of what others may want us to be.You only feel worthless when you allow others to dictate just how much you're really worth,so hold your head up for you're worth more than gold.Thanks for sharing a touching write yet again,well done M.M
loriiOPlondon, Greater London, England UKAug 7, 2012
Thank you very much for reading, understanding and commenting :) I'm so sorry that anyone has to go through things like that
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Loved the write, thanks for sharing... from reading your poem I feel that even though you went through some real rough times with these girls name calling and belittling you, it is YOU who emerged victorious, as for all the wasted effort they put into trying to break you down, THEY DIDN'T, they just made you stronger and instilled a decency in you that will shine through your whole life long..
So.. you could toy with titles in the range of.. victorious.... you only made me stronger..... I am what I am... etc... just some random maybe's that I hope might inspire you to choose your title..
Best Wishes.
Freckles
Perhaps, using stage direction terminology: "Light Rises Within. Fade to Black."
Really enjoyed it, good luck to you in everything you do.
Stay true to yourself, you are worth it.
Lorii