Words left unspoken fall upon deaf ears Yet sometimes say more kept in silence Betrayal of those given their all to you Slashed away in actions not words A turn of the head with lips still sealed Was the only thing you needed to say I saw the shame across your face But flickered away so quickly Message received loud and so clear No time soon shall be forgotten
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
Not about a past relationship, just a release for me to put down in words. More a sadness, due to lack of respect.
understand CloudySky...said well, and hopefully, eases the memory.....Kathy
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 14, 2012
Your poem rings so true, glad you could vent feelings in poem
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 14, 2012
Sometimes we have to vent it off like a volcano spewing magma! Nice poem
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 14, 2012
Very nice poem Cloudy,betryal is a terrible feeling.I once ate its bitter fruit M.M
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 14, 2012
Hi Cloudsky Good to read you again..sad that you should feel like that but good to let it out, very well expressed in your poem..felt your disappointment/sadness Thank you for sharing.
Hi, CloudySky, Yet sometimes say more kept in silence... Life is filled with words and silences. Both have the power to inflict and heal. Thanks for sharing for words with us.
"Words left unspoken fall upon deaf ears Yet sometimes say more kept in silence"
What a powerfull way of describing it and oh so true
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAAug 14, 2012
Dear cloudysky,I understand where you are comming from and your words are well put, keep your chin up,surely things will brighten and you can look back on situatiions as events of learning,even though it is a tough path to walk. I'm for you all the way. studecar
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Thank you for sharing.
Yet sometimes say more kept in silence... Life is filled with words and silences. Both have the power to inflict and heal. Thanks for sharing for words with us.
Yet sometimes say more kept in silence"
What a powerfull way of describing it and oh so true