Cautiously I walk night hours on mean street Pitbull stretched on chains waiting to attack Courthouse stands behind reinforced concrete Reminders of life we want to take back
Sirens erupt and shatter peaceful night Screeching tires lay down rubber's foolish grin An old lady pulls down her shades in fright Lonely souls wait for darkness to begin
Loud are idle youth that travel in packs Pretend to be brave and laughing out loud Carelessly roaming and crossing wrong tracks A fight breaks out inside a huddled crowd
Ends to vulgarity is violence When jobless youth are loosing innocence
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
In this sonnet reflects a commentary of our times when society sows seeds for destruction by a collective failure of its leadership to allow ways for "all its members" to climb up the social-economic ladder.
It's an observation being made across many nations and with all of man's brain power no-one seems to have an answer Yankee. I admire the way you have wrapped the point you are making into a 'proper' poem, that must have been a challenge.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 17, 2012
Your vivid description of the ills of todays society succintly portrays what is most familiar within our culture and political system.I reckon that days of past was much better which i'm sure to many of stories you could tell,a powerful write M.M
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 17, 2012
Yes you have hit the nail on the head. The world has gone crazy
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 17, 2012
I agree too, of how you where able to paint your thoughts into a sonnet..captured very well with the concerns of today's youth..sadly becoming more & more common..
Hi, Yankee4you, Humanity has made progress in so many ways; and, yet, innocence does seem lost, as witnessed by the starkly honest eyes of the poet's sonnet. Cautiously I walk night hours on mean street replacing a healthy Main Street is clear evidence that we are dealing with A Broken Ladder.
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It almost has an errie vampire feel to it..
Humanity has made progress in so many ways; and, yet, innocence does seem lost, as witnessed by the starkly honest eyes of the poet's sonnet. Cautiously I walk night hours on mean street replacing a healthy Main Street is clear evidence that we are dealing with A Broken Ladder.