FEEL

by shimmering_blueeast, Prince Edward Island, Canada

Aug 2012 363 Views 5 comments

FEEL

I hear you weep so far from here I taste your tears like you're next to me
You and me in my delicious memories
Without them we equal nothing
And all I can see is the place I wanna be
Timeless my life was so free
Leaves at my feet, blown to the ground
Their echoes are reaching my ears
Nights coming fast, suns going down,confused
I don't know the answers but neither do you
I want to love you in the ordinary way
Because your ordinary is extraordinary
I used to dream in fairytale color but now all black and white
Kiss my lips, pull me close and bring my heart to life

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Posted: Aug 2012

About this poem:

im not really sure why i wrote it. it doesnt really make sense but i just let my fingers type what they wanted:)

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Comments (5)

ChaptainDublin, IrelandAug 20, 2012

I love that intuitiveness that makes it sound really genuine. It's very direct.

studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAAug 22, 2012

I like your poem,but your comment of not sure why you wrote it-
just let your fingers type what they wanted- shimmering blue,that is when the best poems are written,the words come from your soul. great work,keep it up. studecar