archaic mind stones tip to tip slide to the next ur toe's'll not dip, chance pass's by out of reach afloat it's sail ur towel u've thrown in. . on your knees pushin stones further apart toes gettin wet fear's in your heart, not yet willing to stand with towel in hand an jump to the next as where will I land. . . on the count a three jump an rock steady what the hell am I doin doin to me c'mon leap a faith let me land in stand towel in hand. . . never see whats behind only what lay ahead~
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
Take a chance in life an get rewarded, an never give up even if the first time works out the way you hadn't planned. Never give up:)
Leaps of faith can be intimidating...good job Bentlee!
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 18, 2009
yes my dear friend we should not lost hope , we should not all bad conditions won on us ,we should fight in life to get the best , thanks for ur beauty mind
Comments (7)
TY!
blessings.