You were like telling my life with your words and its killing me softly...lol! sorry for the ad lib. Like Kathy said, got to open up for you never know what might be in his heart...and if that's not the case, you'll still have your friendship, there's nothing to lose
Heartfelt words...sending it to him would be a beautiful act.
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 21, 2012
A lovely touching poem Cloudy .. its better to speak than to keep silent..hard to do I know.. but at least you will know.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 21, 2012
Tell and lose him completely or just hide and wait till the world end... If not for the distance ..i'll say look into his eyes ,you can tell ...but faraway is not that easy ...it's a gamble you have to play with your hand. Good luck and best wishes .
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAAug 22, 2012
Such a lovely poem, do you suppose he feels the same way ? studecar
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAAug 24, 2012
Cloudysky, I hope that you are doing better. I know this kind of pain and understand. Thank you for sharing this write. Be Blessed.
peacebeuponyou76phoenix, Arizona USAOct 13, 2012
EliBoMinsk, BelarusOct 13, 2012
I feel that I will never fell in love again like this. thnx 4 the poem
A lovely poem CloudySky...sometimes fear is hard to overcome.
rashid332faisalabad, Punjab PakistanOct 14, 2012
Very nice a true reflection of love and emotions; It remind s me a beautiful song when two soul friends parted away, one goes to abroad;;;;;;;;; The last stanza is really superb and wonderful.
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Like Kathy said, got to open up for you never know what might be in his heart...and if that's not the case, you'll still have your friendship, there's nothing to lose
nice poem Cloudysky
its better to speak than to keep silent..hard to do I know.. but at least you will know.
If not for the distance ..i'll say look into his eyes ,you can tell ...but faraway is not that easy ...it's a gamble you have to play with your hand.
Good luck and best wishes .
I hope that you are doing better. I know this kind of pain and understand. Thank you for sharing this write. Be Blessed.
It remind s me a beautiful song when two soul friends parted away, one goes to abroad;;;;;;;;;
The last stanza is really superb and wonderful.