Mimosa Pudica (Yankee's Challenge)

Look at my stately stature and bright
Colours of lilac, green, pink and bold
Reflections of a shady shimmer of light
You cast when you venture out looking for gold,
Blinding me with your torch in the dark of night.
Beware of deception when you behold
My solemn disguise and when you delight
In beauties and visions squeezed into the mould
Of your wishful mind, and things that might
Not be as they seemed when fables foretold
How everything would be all right
If you came close and reached to hold
My tender hand which from sheer fright
Would harden as my angst would fold
Its leaves to leave a fist clenched tight
Smashing our dreams of warmth to spiny cold.
For only bees who return to me despite
My sticky pollen to drink my ripened old
Nectar may take a rest from their flight
On my petals. So if you too want my gold
Be patient and gentle - and touch me not quite.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
I know I'm a few days late, but here's my go at Yankee's challenge. The mimosa pudica or touch-me-not is a very interesting plant which as a precaution rapidly closes up its leaves when touched only to re-open them a few minutes later. It's rather unique and has given rise to a long list of common names including 'sensitive plant', 'shameful plant' and 'humble plant'. If you want to read more and watch a video of the leaves folding, check: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mimosa_pudica

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orientalkoru
What an awesome description of "Touch Me Not"...I could not have described it as beautiful and exquisite as you have done so in here. Mimosa pudica, touch me not...or in my dialect we call it "Makahiya"...the shy one! I used it as a title for my first personal blog...because I was that....now...maybe no longer that. Thank you so much for your poem...it has brought me so many warm memories from my childhood when I use to find pleasure in having a race with my cousins picking up their blooms and without their leaves closing...memories of the many blooms we picked and stringed together as leis to wear around our necks...I miss those days...teddybear cheers thumbs up
Ladybee42
I had to go to googlenation for a gander laugh Very beautiful flower, and a very lovely description Chaptain, thumbs up It also makes a brilliant metaphor as Oriental pointed out for a shy person, 'don't touch me'.

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LadyMorgana60
You have written a beautiful poem with sensitive meaning in this poem Chaptain thumbs up "Touch-Me-Not" to be respected wine
Thanks for sharing & the link too.. :)
Chaptain
Thanks a million everyone! Thanks for sharing those memories, Oriental, sounds like a fun pastime bouquet Makahiya must be abundant where you grew up! I've never actually seen it in real life.
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