When

If when the sun goes down

To kiss the water’s edge

Turning sky to painters canvas

Strewn with colors endless bright

You are there beside me

Sitting in the sand so warm

A smile shall spread across my heart

And love shall bloom again
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
Thought I better post something a bit more upbeat. I am not truly upset or just recently broken up. My recent poems have had a touch of sadness, but not from current experiences. I just write what comes in the moment. :)

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orientalkoru
Hi There CloudySky...thanks for this upbeat poem...I enjoyed it and yes...its nice to read something that makes you smile at the end. Yet I can relate to what you've mentioned about writing poems with a tinge of pain and sadness because I tend to write more of it too even though I am not in that kind of emotional state. I think when you are much older, you realise how precious time is and you know the longer you wallow in sadness over being heartbroken the more precious time wasted. I think I am finally at a stage where my own life take centre-stage but my poems will always dig deep to past experiences interspersed with the current and the future that are either colourful or funny. cheers thanks very happy
BBMis4me
I really liked your poem CloudySky. Is simple but very romantic, with a tinge clear and easy to understand.

Blessings angelheart wings
Ladybee42
This is just lovely Cloudysky,

Glad you are not in a bad place as you mention.

thumbs up purple heart purple heart
Poetnumber1
This is a cool poem Cloudy,so warm and appealingbouquet M.M
LadyMorgana60
Lovely poem Cloudy..full of warmth & hope.. your poems are always written from the heart hug Thank you for sharing..hug wine
morgen90210
Sometimes I think my dear cloudy ,our sub-conscious comes forth thru our poems...that's my take ...
Love your poems .Ancient Bullmanheart wings
madtat29
Very nice...
deeprootlove1
very worm and expressing words,have alot of hopes and dreams,soft like summer breeze,thanks for share
studecar
you paint a beautiful poem. studecar
SundaySilence
Hey, who cares about sadness...its from the heart and that all that counts. Nice poem. thumbs up
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