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'The Escape'

A flea and a fly in a floo, were imprisoned so what could they do...the fly said, "Let's flee!" The flea said, "Let's fly!" So they flew through a flaw in the floor!
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
Why I penned this one, I don't really know. Just feeling crazy and watching a fly 'buzzin' around the house trying to get out I guess. :)

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Comments (2)

"Children's literature"

I think your creativity would help a lot to teach children to read a pleasant way, without boring them and if we complement with funny and nice drawings. would be great!!applause yay

Not everyone let their imagination flow in this simple way. Sometimes by prejudice or being concerned with how we look.

Congratulations! raytheon1, and please continues to develop and letting out the child that you have inside. we all have inside that child but often, we want to imprison him as to that flea and to the fly.

So... Let's go to find a flaw in the floor :)

Blessings! angel heart wings
this was sooo cool, thanks for sharing...
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by raytheon1 (5 Poems)
on Aug 2012
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