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Uninvite, Affectionately.

27 years travelling on the byway -
This time 'round I'll only have it my way
Don't bother pussyfooting, I won't pick up the phone
Don't want you 'round for coffee if then I dine alone

I never should've looked your way thinking I was blind
Now I just can't erase your picture from my mind
Trying to carve you away my knife goes blunt
I kick you out the backdoor, you walk back in the front

When you can have all of me, I'd die to break your fall
Half of you's not good enough, it's nothing or all
When you can have all of me, I'd always place you above
It'd kill me to just like you when I really want to love.
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Posted: Aug 2012

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elo69
nice rhyme and rhythm,a lot of personal meaning and maybe some real life experience......nice work chaptain ,...have a good day...elo...wave
Chaptain
Thanks, that one's a bit more 'beat' than the rest of them ...
Nuwahri61
Hey Chaptain.............enjoyed this one................regards n61grin cool
Chaptain
Thanks a million!
niah9
applause oh...i bet we have all lived this....great write Chaptain Kathy teddybear
cafetwo2010
You weave a good story my friend..evoking powerful emotions.professor thumbs up thumbs up
CelticPoet12
Chaptain, THIS IS amazing and yes, very powerfully written. Each stanza has so much to offer. Thanks, Celticcool
windyweatherly
Chaptain,

Its either NOTHING OR ALL. THIS IS WHAT IT SHOULD BE ALWAYS. NO IN BETWEEN. NO GRAY SHADOW UPON WHICH DOUBT EVOLVE. ITS EITHER YOU LOVE ME OR YOU DON'T. VERY BLUNT YET IT RIPS THE TRUTH OUT OF ANYBODY WHO DOES OTHERWISE.



When you can have all of me, I'd die to break your fall
Half of you's not good enough, it's nothing or all
When you can have all of me, I'd always place you above
It'd kill me to just like you when I really want to lov
TheKoreanGhost
Chaptain,
First time reader of your stuff and it wont be my last,
truthfully hard hitting emotions , loved it.handshake cheers
Serenity4two
a beautifully well written poem ,
it shows so well ,the pain one can suffer when there are stronger feelings from one and not the other !
when lucky enough to find someone so very special, it is indeed so very important to give it your all --half measures just won't cut it thumbs up
Wonderful poem --well done --Serenity handshake
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