A Divided Line

Her cutting remarks made their mark
While the winding road drew nearer
Her eyes were now slit and of envy,
As he halted to a stop.

His love for her was now on edge
As she continued her deepest feelings
Never was he so concerned
To see her bleeding.
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Posted: Oct 2009

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gypsyheart
Powerful poem and so true.Thanks for sharing lordhugnkiss1hug
moonlove
Interesting!!thumbs up
jazzy75
Oh wow! strong poem lordhugnkiss1, i really like the way you writeapplause
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