sometimes at night when i look to the sky, i start thinking of you and then ask myself why*Why do i love you i think and i smile because i know the list could run on for miles*The whisper of your voice the warmth in your touch,so many little things that make me love you so much*The way that you support me and help with my emotions,the way that u care and show such devotion*The way that your kiss fills me with desire and how u hold me with the warmth of a blazing fire*The way your eyes shine when you look at me, lost with you forever is where i want to be*The way that i feel when ur by my side,a sense of completion and overflowing with pride*The dreams that i dream that all involve you, the possibilities i see and the things we can do*How u finish the puzzle that lies inside my heart, how that deep inside my soul you are the most important part*I could go on for days telling of what i feel,but all you really must know is my love for you is real.
Very nice in thinking and diction but lacks the poetic form and style. All the best
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 18, 2012
There is a style and a form that you write...just not so clearly seen by others ... I got your points quite well ..in fact it's so clear ,thank you for sharing .and welcome aBoard Poet's corner.
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All the best
I got your points quite well ..in fact it's so clear ,thank you for sharing .and welcome aBoard Poet's corner.