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why i love u

sometimes at night when i look to the sky, i start thinking of you and then ask myself why*Why do i love you i think and i smile because i know the list could run on for miles*The whisper of your voice the warmth in your touch,so many little things that make me love you so much*The way that you support me and help with my emotions,the way that u care and show such devotion*The way that your kiss fills me with desire and how u hold me with the warmth of a blazing fire*The way your eyes shine when you look at me, lost with you forever is where i want to be*The way that i feel when ur by my side,a sense of completion and overflowing with pride*The dreams that i dream that all involve you, the possibilities i see and the things we can do*How u finish the puzzle that lies inside my heart, how that deep inside my soul you are the most important part*I could go on for days telling of what i feel,but all you really must know is my love for you is real.
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Posted: Sep 2012
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forever is along time

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Comments (2)

Very nice in thinking and diction but lacks the poetic form and style.
All the best
There is a style and a form that you write...just not so clearly seen by others ...
I got your points quite well fact it's so clear ,thank you for sharing .and welcome aBoard Poet's corner.heart wings
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