A long time is not long enough the land opens up swallows the tear of man sorrows she feels and opens her vains giving her everything and making more for man to share greed has taken over the fever of man is hot sorrow she feels opens her land swallows his tears as she shares her blood that's in her vains bomb's bursting rocks moving defacing the land that gives taking all of what she is making slight breeze the warm sun she protects the men that's turning her into a wasteland
A very sad picture but so very real...wonder what it takes for Man to stop killing this planet...lovely to read from you dear kickit...
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 19, 2012
Powerful write...you really kick it ! Thanks enjoyed it
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 19, 2012
for man we are all greedy,,never get sattisfied on what the mother nature has given to us...we all want everything,till all those things are gone to waste and destroyed,thru that greedines of man,now we have to suffer for nature takes its toll
once again sir kickit,very well written and brilliant write as always
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 19, 2012
A real powerful and emotional write
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 19, 2012
The same here for me Mike powerful though i gather much sadness which really brings out the best in one...take care friend M.M
There is no question we have made a mess out of this land. Like George Carlin said, we took this beautiful landscape that we inherited, well actually we stole it from the Indians and turned it into a coast to coast shopping mall.
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once again sir kickit,very well written and brilliant write as always