A nightmare unfolds...Pt.1

There is a place,
We were told not to go,
The four of us,
A girl included,
With signs and symbols seen, All around the place,
Hiding shadow with eyes, Watching our every moment.
With the sound of thunder,
A dark storm is coming,
We have no choice,
But onwards keep moving,
Cold and hungry are what we are feeling,
A sense of dreaded danger comes a calling,
A chilling scream unheard by human beings,
The storm comes,
There is no retreating,
So dark and heavy,
The rain is falling,
We are stuck in here,
Without hope of surviving,
This is the start of many uneventful happening...
I had a dream of this drama sequence unfolding..
Fear of what is coming i am not showing,
Faint laughs and whisper is what we are hearing,
And then suddenly the girl with us is crying,
For reason unknown she then start laughing,
Is she mad or possess we begin worrying,
Noone dares to stop her as her body start shaking,
By now she stares at us...
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Posted: Sep 2012

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lorii
blues now i have to watch something fluffy to get my mind off the scaryness lolz. what happends next tell me im itching to knowwww

Nice poem! :)

Lorii x
SUMMIT09
HORROR AT ITS BEST WHERES THE REST
mcradloff
If there was a place with this kind of fear and loathing, it would probably be Haiti. I just finished a movie called The Serpent and the Rainbow. It is set in Haiti and was made in 1988. It is basically about zombies and being buried alive.devil cats meow jackolantern hijack
orientalkoru
shake...rattle...and shake more...devil peace
jazzy75
Fast paced...and....and....now I'm left hanging. Can't wait for the continuation!yay
morgen90210
Thank you Lori ...it's a one of my hardest one to write coz it's all jumble up inside...
There's a ton more but just have to cut..edit and rewrite it again ...confused grin
morgen90210
Thank you summit09 ,..glad I got you hook ...enjoyed your poems too.peace
morgen90210
Koru san are you shaking coz of excitement or fear ???
Or maybe you want in ...
Thanks kathy ...sad flower
morgen90210
Jazz ! Long time no see ..glad you pop in with your not so long comment ..in fact this is the longest comment you've made...thank you so much ..hope you like the next...peace
candykid
Happy Halloween.....devil
morgen90210
HappybHalloween Candykiddevil
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