heavy cool pallor over this room air fearfully still yet windows, wide open
you came and you went as you had a mind to but this time your leaving ...has left us without you
hopin' rainbows of angels are watchin' our baby and that she's smiling at us and looking so proud for that's the way we all feel about her a loving dear spirit that did livin' out loud
with beauty so rare no finger can point it at the difference that she made when she entered a room
for the gleam in her eye hot fire within her was more than enough to melt you away
there's a lump in our throats when we think about you how you fought through the pain and faced down the fear
teardrops are falling 'cause you're not around us but you've touched our lives you'll always be here
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
it has been one year since Lyn's daughter, Addie, passed away at age 32. another angel fallen to breast cancer.
" You'll always be there" It does seem that way for me. The ones who have entered my life and then left seem to go on living through me. I carry them around inside my heart. And little things in life that I do without even thinking about it is because I knew them and it is a part of them that I adopted that is now a part of me. What a loving tribute you have written for her
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 28, 2012
Yes as happy golucky says a beautiful tribute to her.
Hi, hedistuff, hopin' rainbows of angels are watchin' my baby... Abiding love watched over her days on earth. May it be so for her on the other side of death. In memory of Lyn's daughter that did livin' out loud, I offer my condolences for your great loss. Love to you both.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 28, 2012
with beauty so rare no finger can point it at the difference that she made when she entered a room
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hopin' rainbows of angels are watchin' my baby... Abiding love watched over her days on earth. May it be so for her on the other side of death. In memory of Lyn's daughter that did livin' out loud, I offer my condolences for your great loss. Love to you both.
no finger can point it
at the difference that she made
when she entered a room
Beautiful tribute.
Hugs and love as always my friend
Beautiful poem Hedistuff