I did not Offer the help I knew you need For fear you may succeed Achieving greatness in the process Surpassing me in my progress
I did not Because I feared Your getting hurt if you tried Life has too many uncertainty I want your life to be risk free
I did not Because no one helped me I had to make it on my own Through blood , sweat and stone I would have you work yourself to the bone
I did not Because I wanted you to be The person I envision You showed potential and creativity Would not listen to me
I did not Because I must be better than you And will not assist you to do better than me I put myself first in everything I would hate myself if you outdo me
I did not Because this is too good for you You dare to want to rise above your station Desiring equality with your betters Down you are and there you must stay
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
I know that I should make it on my own. These words came to me as I reflected on the reasons I was given as to why I got no help.
I did not Because I must be better than you And will not assist you to do better than me I put myself first in everything I would hate myself if you outdo me
Very interesting poem.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 28, 2012
And then there are others who wants to stay at the top if possible forever .this is reality and thanks for sharing. I'll tell you a very odd funny one. I work at a place with no experience,skills or product knowledge...no one help some poke fun..the veterans would sneer and look down on me. After 6mths things change for the worse..i became their target coz I was getting good or honestly lucky when I catch Big fish and they got nothing! Came to a point where I got arrested for TOUTING! and later bedridden for a whole week coz my legs cant carry me!! Strange but I knew more was coming so I left that place..i believe it was black magic or how can u explain the sudden extreme pain to stand up? So I know there are some mean fellows who see you as a threat! Thank you for this poem.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 28, 2012
This poem was also an interesting one for me Prenge
I did not Because no one helped me I had to make it on my own Through blood , sweat and stone I would have you work yourself to the bone
I did not Because I wanted you to be The person I envision You showed potential and creativity Would not listen to me
I did not Because I must be better than you And will not assist you to do better than me I put myself first in everything I would hate myself if you outdo me
I did not Because this is too good for you You dare to want to rise above your station Desiring equality with your betters Down you are and there you must stay
charliejaparteeAuckland, New ZealandSep 29, 2012
there are definatly some bitter people out there and some of them are parents, i enjoyed reading your record.
prengeOPmandeville, Manchester JamaicaSep 29, 2012
Odette67 If only so much of what I wrote in this case was not true. Thanks for reading.
prengeOPmandeville, Manchester JamaicaSep 29, 2012
Morgen902010 Once a lady shed tears because she was scared I could be used as a replacement for her. She had no reason to fret because she was my junior. talk about what fear can do.
The achievement is always much more satisfying when done by yourself anyway no? That's how I see things anyway. I have a difficulty understanding how one person could see themselves as better or worse than anyone as there are so many different ways to 'measure' a person, yet doing so is a pointless exercise as it serves no purpose. If you feel someone measures you it may be just that, 'a feeling'. It's a nice poem prenge, sounds as though you are a bit down and self absorbed when you wrote it. Sorry if you are.
prengeOPmandeville, Manchester JamaicaSep 29, 2012
Poetnumber1 Now I do not feel extra bad knowing there are others that identify with me.
prengeOPmandeville, Manchester JamaicaSep 29, 2012
Charliejapartee You scare me when you mention bitter parents especially if it's toward their own children. Admittedly I have known some rather interesting parents.
Comments (9)
Because I must be better than you
And will not assist you to do better than me
I put myself first in everything
I would hate myself if you outdo me
Very interesting poem.
I'll tell you a very odd funny one.
I work at a place with no experience,skills or product knowledge...no one help some poke fun..the veterans would sneer and look down on me.
After 6mths things change for the worse..i became their target coz I was getting good or honestly lucky when I catch Big fish and they got nothing!
Came to a point where I got arrested for TOUTING! and later bedridden for a whole week coz my legs cant carry me!! Strange but I knew more was coming so I left that place..i believe it was black magic or how can u explain the sudden extreme pain to stand up? So I know there are some mean fellows who see you as a threat! Thank you for this poem.
I did not
Because no one helped me
I had to make it on my own
Through blood , sweat and stone
I would have you work yourself to the bone
I did not
Because I wanted you to be
The person I envision
You showed potential and creativity
Would not listen to me
I did not
Because I must be better than you
And will not assist you to do better than me
I put myself first in everything
I would hate myself if you outdo me
I did not
Because this is too good for you
You dare to want to rise above your station
Desiring equality with your betters
Down you are and there you must stay
If only so much of what I wrote in this case was not true. Thanks for reading.
Once a lady shed tears because she was scared I could be used as a replacement for her. She had no reason to fret because she was my junior. talk about what fear can do.
Now I do not feel extra bad knowing there are others that identify with me.
You scare me when you mention bitter parents especially if it's toward their own children. Admittedly I have known some rather interesting parents.