once more

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Sep 2012 509 Views 6 comments

once more

whispered breath.....upon my door
what direction.....i can't ignore
dawn breaks .......colours in awe
as birds in tune......sing galore
still the trees......as i lookout
no sound i hear..no roar or shout
wondering .......on a womans pout
as i search....... my heart about
treading gently .....to the shore
through palms an paths that i saw
filtered light ....on green spore
a well worn path....... once more

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Posted: Sep 2012

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morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 29, 2012

I'm clueless of this form/style but worth reading and enjoyed immersely .thank you Nu

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 29, 2012

love it...we after all are creatures of habit...thanks for sharing a well worn path once more Nu

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 29, 2012

Hey Morgen its just about getting up an checking the surf in the early hours with other things also on my mind

.......all the elements that can make it special also

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 29, 2012

Hey OK .....thanks for the comments ......just had a week away .....didn't even have to cross a road to get to the beach .......it was awesome ....regards n61

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 30, 2012

I like your style,im not clueless like Morgen