Castaway on the Moon

Blackbirds in flight over a restless sea
Cloudy days casting dark feelings appall
Tossed high like driftwood beyond foaming scree
Sadness shadows my door once and for all

Casting no hope deep in a storm's cold eye
No warmth is found in a coat so shoddy
Lady luck laughs with each roll of the die
Spins her web up and over my body

Never tasted such fear entombed within
Confined inside space so soft and silky
Where darkness increases every spin
In a galaxy defined as milky


A time capsule not to open too soon
Might as well be castaway on the moon
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
A sober sonnet reflecting my lonely mood on a wet, cold drizzly day feels as if being trapped inside of a spider's coccoon (wrapped by clouds)....for who knows how long ....weird thought ...I know...

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DagOne
thumbs up well done.
Odette67
Never tasted such fear entombed within

You sum up my feelings exactly Yankee... in this lovely though sombre Sonnet.
purple heart
Fellsman
Hi Yankee

You make liberal use of pessimistic metaphor in this sonnet, not that there's anything wrong that, another fine write from the Yankee pen...

Regards

Bill wine wine.
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