snared

by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Oct 2012 747 Views 5 comments

snared

one might find such dazy gaze upon thee
oh fateful preamble...eye contact
with head atilt
lips part, a flash of tongue
the marking of time for you is begun
...the latest choice
what's not to like?
sparking magnet of all impulse
drawn in, caught!
today is super okay
tomorrow, huh?
there is a god and he'll alter time for you
but, you can't go back, and you're not going forward
in fact,
you've been frozen
hooked, affixed on a creel line
...on suspension!

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Posted: Oct 2012

About this poem:

'I am awash with animals humping each other' hilda moaned at passing through the room.

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Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 5, 2012

one might find such eyes upon thee
oh fateful preamble...eye contact

WOW! This is awesome.

hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAOct 5, 2012

thank you Odette..

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 8, 2012

Hedistuff....brilliant...this can be read so many different ways...lol! Love it!!

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusOct 8, 2012

yeah, this was really deep, enjoyed it much!

hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAOct 8, 2012

thank you windy, jazzy, earl.....windy jazzy earl? put up or shut up? earl put up and.....never shut up. yea, he sure was the jazzy. earl the pearl monroe was an nba(pro basketball) guard (60's,70's) for the baltimore bullets and later the new york knicks that was never shy of expressing himself verbally or physically on the court...

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