blind love-making

she first grasps the forehead of his
introduction, for finally,knowingly , amongst those
she thinks of as truly gifted,
next to the unimaginable others.....so shallow.

crawl down the fingers after images of his thought.
to a sleigh-like nose, that surprises the kiss of her fingertips.

after so many conversations,they've begun
to laugh at the "normals"
who consider to judge by light.

He never touched her so soon, as to understand himself
a so-called, handicapped gentleman.
Spoke to her as above the, gentleness , the
images of their interrogations,
and smiles they touched
without focusing upon.


It is 1:32 am unknowingly ....
he's exhausted yet she has to say, as he
realizes to still have a happy tear...

"My God, we're truly Gifted still..
To Truly Feel"

he reaches over to feel her grin,for
the first time.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2012
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some are so shallow to judge by sight.....it may truly be a gift to feel, more than analyze

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morgen90210
Reminds me of the blind opera singer ...thanks heart wings
Spartacus2012
Good one. Beats the everyday forced rhyme greeting card poetry..
poppyred
Yes I agree.
I think this is very special and feel its potency without seeing. applause Thankyou
Odette67
Sometimes in the pitch black of night when love making takes place...We have no need of sight...Touch, taste, and smell become more potent. Enjoyed this poem. purple heart
Ladybee42
It's not shallow to live how you are, it is more shallow to imagine you know how others are.
A very lovely poem with an interesting look at life.

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