Distance

by sarasvathyJakarta, Indonesia

Oct 2012 555 Views 3 comments

Distance

You appeared in my dream
Finally
After long endless conversation
It was faceless
At first
But I never doubt your being
Then came words
Voices
Everything that I need
To materialize you

Should everything be materialized?
Feelings
Longing
Would we ever reach "there"?
Should we stay "here"?
What is "here" and "there"?

Was it really a distance between us?
Only miles away and nothing else?

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Posted: Oct 2012

About this poem:

Is distance just a matter of miles?

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Comments (3)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 6, 2012

Hi sarasvathy i would like to think that distance being termed as miles in some cases,i enjoyed this one also

You appeared in my dream
Finally
After long endless conversation
It was faceless
At first
But I never doubt your being
Then came words
Voices
Everything that I need
To materialize you

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 6, 2012

Saras words are all u have to take my heart away...very nice poem and enjoy your weekend.

sarasvathyOPJakarta, IndonesiaOct 6, 2012

Hi Poet

In my opinion, distance in the form of miles is easier to be overcome, as simple as taking a flight then you are together. But another "distance" can sometimes appear even when you are face to face, next to each other... Anyway thank you for stopping by