days with out

the tear that was shed
was not the tear that fell
but a glistening slip of tongue
held out to dry
upon an empty berth of grey
knotted to prickly pear
a bone white desert sky
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Posted: Oct 2012

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Poetnumber1
You always leave me scratching my head searching for clues to decipher the wealth of your weighty poems.confused frustrated I think this will stick in my head for a long time......''a bone white desert sky''.excellinggift hug
Macduff5
Hi Jazzy,

I almost understand this one...I think. Well I have an interpretation...what appears and what is? Am I on the right track? Why do you make me think? grin
wine
Ladybee42
Oh so cool Jazzy, I'm not so good at brevity, but I practice occasionally. (your new photo is great)



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windyweatherly
Jazzy a very deep sense of pain Jazzy

only when we hurt that joy is to catapult in madness if only to put us in our toes for the birthing of a new one.

great write Jazzy
amfa65
great imagery
heat
thirst
quench
but
sand

'waste land'

efforts fruitless
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