the tear that was shed was not the tear that fell but a glistening slip of tongue held out to dry upon an empty berth of grey knotted to prickly pear a bone white desert sky
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 8, 2012
You always leave me scratching my head searching for clues to decipher the wealth of your weighty poems. I think this will stick in my head for a long time......''a bone white desert sky''.excelling
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 9, 2012
Hi Jazzy,
I almost understand this one...I think. Well I have an interpretation...what appears and what is? Am I on the right track? Why do you make me think?
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I almost understand this one...I think. Well I have an interpretation...what appears and what is? Am I on the right track? Why do you make me think?
only when we hurt that joy is to catapult in madness if only to put us in our toes for the birthing of a new one.
great write Jazzy
heat
thirst
quench
but
sand
'waste land'
efforts fruitless