The Bridge stood like a sentinal of doom against this dense fog.. We all stood there wondering who might venture the first step towards this towering monster The wind howled through the massive steel columns that supported this mysterious beast.. We only heard stories as to what might be on the other side.. A few hopefuls mumbled that there might be a new beginning, a new dawn Still more seem to fear that we merely were walking into the jaws of death, mere sheep being wooed into the stomachs of some hellish other worldly creature A woman took a step toward the bridge and an old man clutched her arm and warned, 'Don't go!' She pulled away and disappeared in the fog A brave soul?.. A fool? We all wondered. Strange clanking noises rang out from the bridge and we surmised the womans fate Yet who had the courage to follow in her foot steps? What awaited us on the other side? What had we to loose to find out? Should we turn and merely retread the same old ground we bemoaned as 'death's vally?' What was back there for us? Better to die in freedom than live as we had been living.. in self imposed slavery.. This is what we told ourselves as we cautiously arm in arm stepped toward the Bridge.. If only~
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Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
You have to play Sci-fi music in your head as your reading this..it worked for me.lol. IT's the weekend!
Makes me think of "The Fog", a bit of a gripper this one Rob
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAOct 14, 2012
Jim my friend. This is a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing...
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 16, 2012
Should we turn and merely retread the same old ground we bemoaned as 'death's vally?' What was back there for us? Better to die in freedom than live as we had been living..
Comments (4)
Rob
the same old ground we bemoaned
as 'death's vally?'
What was back there for us?
Better to die in freedom than
live as we had been living..
Dear Cafe,
I missed this gem..FANTASTIC write.
sounds more horror than sci fi with the clanking noises and 'death's valley' Entertaining though Cafe