Longing Paradise Haiku

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by Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont, USA

Oct 2012 952 Views 7 comments

Longing Paradise (Haiku)

Author: Yankee4you

Longing paradise
I rubbed sand in my long hair
Leaping in the air

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Posted: Oct 2012

About this poem:

Reflecting on some wild imagery of my younger days and crazy ways....

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Comments (7)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 28, 2012

loved Haiku mmmm sounds as if you had fun.

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAOct 28, 2012

I can somehow imagine you doing this with long hair of course!

cool Haiku Yankee

1Bell4truthLumberton, North Carolina USAOct 28, 2012

You have composed this haiku with great skill. If I was a teacher I would give you a gold star

Also the subject matter would get a double star I visioned the beach unless of course you had the desert in mind

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 28, 2012

simple, direct....and well said.......loved it Yankee.....Kathy

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaOct 29, 2012

Awesome...this short walk down memory lane brought me warm thoughts in deed

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAOct 29, 2012

Been awhile since I've been in sand on a beach. They do have a sand area at my local pool, but the kids don't wash off their feet and the regular pool has sand at the bottom because of this.

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Yankee4youOPSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 2, 2012

Yea...thanks for the comments...you know sometimes you have completely dissolve all the complexity of life like so much unwanted glue that just sticks too much to everything....thank goodness for sand...it really is a great thing.....it just helps seperate stuff apart.....